The Most Powerful God of War System

With Emperor Qi Tian's divine move, I also need Mao's other martial arts! ! !

First, the writing is really good, although the system is already an older version of Goldfinger. It doesn't write down what attributes the system is, but it should not be an upgrade. Not bad! Second, you didn't write about upgrading. This is your biggest success, because upgrading is so common, and everyone who reads the novel has a sense of immersion. Your Dantian is so awesome that it's a flaw. You are absolutely right to repair the Dantian now. The other thing is the character of the protagonist. How should I put it? It's a little too calm, but that's okay. It has to do with the system, so it's not a mistake. It's completely understandable. I usually criticize people with faults. I don't have any fault with this. Some of them may be too happy. In such a small place, there are things like Sword Intent, Phoenix and True Fire. From now on, the rhythm of cutting mountains with a sword and shattering the sky with a punch is a little bit faster. Third, it is absolutely correct that revenge does not happen overnight. Nowadays, most novels are about having a grudge and waiting to write one or two hundred chapters before taking revenge... There are actually too many ways to take revenge. Even if the protagonist is not strong enough to defeat him, but poisoning his descendants is completely fine. When reading novels, they are basically about boosting, so if the author cannot take revenge, it is okay. Revenge after upgrading is okay, but don't be too far away, otherwise it is not revenge, which is troublesome. Fourth, it's a bit confusing? Looking at the introduction, the system should be about understanding some characters in novels such as Jin Gu, their feelings or their experiences. This is completely possible. It would be best if it can be exchanged. You can completely use Jin Gu's martial arts myth~! There is absolutely no problem in using these mortal martial arts in a fantasy interface. The best example is that the current devouring novels are completely the epitome of Beiming~. Most of the current fantasy martial arts imitate the martial arts in the novels of people like Jin Guhuang! Fifth, instead of writing about martial arts skills and moves, you can use those from martial arts novels. As well as the protagonist's martial arts, I suggest that it is best to have moves, such as the Wind God Kick, which can be divided into vigorous and vigorous, wind and residual clouds. Don't just use one move. Who knows how strong you are with this move? This move is used to defeat monsters, and this move is also used to defeat bosses? Sixth, the progress of the plot needs to be accelerated. Because you are now engaged to a woman from the Long family, I really don't want to read about breaking off the engagement. You wrote about not breaking off the engagement. It's actually really good. Although I don't know what a big family is like, I also know that big families love face. After reading what the author wrote, it's obvious that the Long family is very big, so big that one can manage it. Family can be represented. To put it bluntly, it actually means that the protagonist will enter the sect immediately. The Long family is likened to the sect. There is no need to regret the marriage. At worst, the protagonist can be imprisoned or something. Also, I really don't like the appearance of such things as spell guilds and mercenary guilds. Really this and that Writing fantasy, is this Western fantasy? Were there trade unions in ancient times? It didn't make sense to laugh at all. You can totally use gangs, families, sects, or even schools. I don't want to have one. Who would train students selflessly? What do you think of the 21st century? It's a world where individuals cannibalize people. Your father can give you a blow and call you eternal. He can turn over! So the school is totally bullshit! In addition, I like the author to write the protagonist as a normal person quickly, who can repair broken arms and legs, repair veins and Dantian, and repair his face. He doesn't need to be awesome, but he must not be disabled. Yang Guo is disabled because he has no ability to repair it. Who can repair it? Who would be happy to wear armless sleeves all day long.

The writing is really good, keep up the good work, I will always pay attention to it

Holy shit, is this woman a Confucian? Is it okay to be so cruel? By the way, would Confucius and Mencius break in?

The divine characters are completely incomprehensible. . . . I watched it at 9:09 in the morning.

As a book friend, there is nothing I can do to help you. I can only try my best to vote for you and set up a subscription after you put it on the shelf. I hope it will be of some help to you in raising your daughter.

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I would like to state in advance that I am a bit of a teacher, so my concerns may be a little bit different. Please don't mind me! I haven't written many big books yet, so I only have three things to note. First, I have only read one article written by Da Da, so I am not very clear about how Da Da Da handles harems. I can only give some suggestions here. I hope Da Da Da can treat the harem issue carefully. If you do not plan to have a harem, it is best (to be honest, there are not many authors who can grasp the emotional drama from the starting point). If you plan to have a harem, then Da Da Da must grasp the temperament of the female character, and do not become a full [uid=645720] after she enters the harem. 2. Since you are preparing to use earthly martial arts to dominate other worlds, you must grasp the levels of many martial arts. If there is no reasonable explanation for highly controversial martial arts such as Dugu Nine Swords and Beiming Shengong, it is best not to major in martial arts as the protagonist. If you give it away in the future, you can say that your ideas are inconsistent, so that there will not be too much disputes (of course, if you can control the degree of disputes, then using these settings appropriately will be a good choice) Third, the problem of realm combat power division. This is a common problem in most novels. In the early stage, in order to show danger or some other problems, the top combat power (special things) were restricted early. As a result, in the later stage of writing, these long-restricted things were unblocked for the sake of the plot, and appeared in large numbers, so that there were inconsistencies. I hope that when the author is writing the outline, he can sort out the divisions of combat power levels, so that the high-end combat power levels are similar to those that were said to be only a few dozen in the early stage, but thousands of them pop up in the later stage, which makes people speechless! Ps: I refuse personal attacks. If any readers are unhappy with my tone and ignore me, please click X. Don't lower the quality of readers like me...

When did Guazhou become Zhenjiang? Study geography well, Guazhou belongs to Hanjiang District of Yangzhou

Author, you directly positioned the protagonist as "terrible". It's really strange that a girl is talking to him like this=. =Especially the part about Duguqin... And didn't it mean that the protagonist's bones were deformed? Why do others recognize him?

"Previously Ou Yun... 10%, A strange feeling appeared in Long Ling'er's body, every ounce of power... Wonderful" "Those who are waiting for reincarnation for a thousand lifetimes..." I wiped it... I almost thought it was love at first sight, I almost vomited... But luckily it wasn't... "... Like a passionate love affair..." ... This description is indeed a bit sudden... It scares me

The most poisonous woman has a heart, and there are those who are not poisonous but have no husband. .

You missed one update today, and you should have three updates tomorrow!

Cooperate with the Li family to get rid of your greatest combat power, not to mention self-destruction of the Great Wall, and you are not worried that the opponent will get the advantage. If it is publicized, your reputation will be ruined.