Divine Paladin

It was extremely toxic from the beginning. . . Even if a bad gambler achieves something, he will lose it one day. Sorry, I personally don't have any good impressions of gamblers, and a person who has no self-control to this extent is a "waste" person even if he has the opportunity.

When I saw Chapter 181, I was finally poisoned and died. It wasn't that I didn't want to persevere, but that the author was too desperate. You said that it is okay for you to build a guild, and the entire contribution system is okay. The funniest thing is that the contribution points of 100 people in a dungeon are the same. Is this fair to you? There are no bonuses to command, output ranking, and damage resistance ranking? No deductions for mistakes? I really can't hold on to this novel that is too intellectually demanding!

It's quite embarrassing. I believe that a person who has been reborn for 6 years and has a few years of experience is a god-level person, but I feel very embarrassed about a god-level thief! God level! ! ! ! !

Advertising party, your family has a bad household registration. In the past, the book reviews I read were either high-quality products or jokes. Now there are scum everywhere.

Don't listen to the author's nonsense. The introduction says he doesn't know how to be a eunuch, but he has updated it by 60,000 to 70,000 words. The third book is too common.

The blood volume is not displayed, and the attack is not displayed. If you have constant PKs in a novice village, you can't go to clear monsters properly. The PKs are endless. As a reborn person, you don't have to use your own advantages to grab resources. You always PK here and there in the novice village.

I like the profession of knight very much, especially the eight virtues you describe are in line with my taste. I don't want other novels to be too YY and have no knightly virtues at all, which makes me sick to read.

I originally voted for the first monthly ticket yesterday, but I didn't expect it to be released today. Well, I also voted for the recommendation 🌹 Work hard.

In Chapter 17, I saw that I wanted to give up the book. There are many people with the same talent, so the only thing left is to practice hard. A god-level thief appeared before your game even started, so what's the point of being reborn? Although you can still change the poison after finishing the book,

Aoxue is just an ordinary first-class guild, not the top one. Real online games insist on reporting grudges on the spot, and a few people will remember them for a few days longer. However, as long as the qualified guild management considers interests before taking revenge, if a high-level executive like Aoxue brings personal grudges into the guild, the people below will naturally do the same, such as the two the protagonist met at the beginning. Aoxue members, in this way, Aoxue will offend many more people than friends. Aoxue members generally have a cold face and often talk nonsense. Even if men are interested, they will think they are too pretentious and stay away from them. Therefore, even if Aoxue is always surrounded by a group of men, they will not be the same group of people, and those who leave will eventually become enemies.

For the sake of one million words, I hope you will be more rigorous.

The subsequent characters are also very interesting to write, but the plot description experience after entering the game is not very good. One of the main reasons is that the flies called Boss xx and Big Stick are too annoying and appear repeatedly. According to my rough statistics, up to Chapter 26, there are 22 chapters in total after entering the game. I met one as soon as I entered the game, and there are 10-11 chapters in the remaining chapters. I am writing these chapters. Flies, in real time, I have met this group of people 5 times in one to two days, and a top member of the four major guilds and a god-level thief caused trouble for these flies to the protagonist. After finally getting rid of them, someone from the other four major guilds came to cause trouble again, and there was no end. There is a bit of a pacing problem in the previous section. A large number of chapters are spent focusing on resolving such a small contradiction. As a result, so many people have lost their appetite before it even feels good. Online games should attract readers with powerful skills, powerful equipment, powerful characters, and novel task chains. This kind of small fight is the least technical. It can be done in one stroke. Beating them is like beating a mob. Will you spend 11 chapters to write how to defeat a mob? The protagonist's initial goal in entering the game should be to make money and enjoy the game. Once you have a clear goal, what you write after you should focus on this goal. What problems will you encounter? How will the protagonist solve them one by one? How will you carry out long-term planning and layout strategies? What goals should be set to be completed, which ones are high-difficulty and which are low-difficulty? How do others plan? These are very interesting. . . But just writing about being annoyed by so many flies every day, blowing them off to such a profound background and having such great influence that the protagonist passively fights against them, it's over. It's not interesting to have a supporting character that makes everyone annoyed when they see it.

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Ranked fourth on the best-selling list for newcomers and tenth on the best-selling list for new works, he finally emerged! Ha ha

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Great book! Absolutely great book! ! Great author, come on!

I feel like the villain in it is the gangster and the little bitch who are too stupid. . . No IQ. It feels like it lowers the overall grade a bit. The relationship between the protagonist and the assassin is also quite stiff and a bit abrupt. To this day I still don't understand why Assassin wanted the protagonist for once. That reason is so strange. I hope the author can improve it.

Then why add a damn fat guy ←_←?

The first chapter of this book is very good, but I'm not interested in reading the rest.

Recently I was reading a novel about Saiyans in another world, but the author is a bit slow in updating it, saying that it needs to be collected in large quantities. If anyone likes this type, you can save it and let the author enjoy it more. The book is called "The Legend of Ace"

A glass of toast to the past, a glass of toast to the past

It doesn't feel like it was written by a novice. Unless you usually work in literature, you are not a journalist...

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