My Apprentice Died Again

It was quite fun to watch. After reading it for a long time, I found that I was starting to get a little confused between Sincerity and Jingran, so I had to give it up for the sake of my Chinese proficiency.

There is a sentence I don't know whether I should say or not. To be honest, when writing a novel like Xiu Xian Wen, a law of the jungle, one should be decisive in killing, eradicating the weeds, and speaking less about reasoning. After all, in a world like Xiu Xian Wen, a law of the jungle, only the weak will abide by the rules! Those with weak minds would have been killed long ago. The three views in this lawless world are different from today's. Although they are generally similar, there are differences. The so-called "people who do not work for themselves will be punished by heaven and earth" is more suitable for this world of the jungle. Of course, the author wrote this article for fun, and everything is based on happiness. The author worked hard on coding! 🌹🌹🌹

The first female channel book, the author has a very positive outlook on life

A very favorite book. Everyone likes it. I feel that the heroine's golden finger is very special. The netizen's world spirit that I have never met is the golden finger. After being transported through time, the girl went to the front line again and again to fix bugs. Yes, it was a bug! This is her main mission. Resurrection after death is no ordinary resurrection. Sometimes it's a baby, sometimes it's a man, a dragon, a shemale, a jade, a big tree... Well, it's fun anyway! The author gives us unlimited imagination and joy! The description and setting of the emotional line are also very interesting. The male protagonist is a tall, cold and handsome master of immortality. Is there no reason not to like this master who has all his life skills turned on, good looks and martial arts, and a bit shy at the same time? It's so hard to wait for the heroine to knock down the master... Crying...

Although the heroine is a virgin, her personality is a bit off-kilter and a bit of an internet talk show. The heroine's golden finger becomes stronger once she dies and is reborn. This story feels like an online game novel. Well, the story is pretty good, you can check it out.

In particular, my apprentice died again, and it was very beautiful. The beginning of the story is that the heroine travels to the world of immortal cultivation and meets Yuyan. The girl is silly and cute, but Yuyan is cold and ruthless. Zed treats the heroine very well, she is my favorite, and the author is very good.

I have read the entire book, and I have not seen an article that is so consistent with my three views for a long time ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Brief review: This is a novel about cultivating immortals with three righteous views and a sense of justice. The purpose of cultivating immortals is to save the world. It is an easy and humorous read. Book title: "My Disciple Died Again" Author: You Qian Keywords: Xianxia Romance, Classical Xianxia, Time Travel, Immortal Lord Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: One day I was browsing the list of the comic book library. The first thing that caught my eye was the comic cover of "My Apprentice Died Again". The two colors of pink and gray blended together. It was warm, loving and unobtrusive. It attracted me deeply at a glance. The leader in the world of cultivating immortals, Lord Yu Yan, has flowing white hair and is not as cool as a cultivator. He is a beautiful boy with an innocent face. He catches the reincarnated young disciple and heroine Zhu Yao, wearing ancient costumes and modern costumes, but there is no sense of disobedience at all. The master has not changed much along the way. Oh no, the wisp of soul left behind by the apprentice after his ascension looks so cute, like a rag doll. The apprentice changes his appearance every time he is reborn, which has a strong visual impact and is very suitable for the romanticism of little girls. The comic has been updated to chapter 121, so come back and read the novel. Book title and introduction: The introduction of "My Apprentice Failed Again" is clear at a glance. Master Yuyan, known as the number one person in the world of cultivating immortals, accepted a female apprentice and taught her carefully, but she failed. Then she accepted another apprentice, taught her carefully, and she failed again... Opening: The first paragraph of the opening chapter, the heroine Zhu Yao, has traveled through time. This is a world of immortal cultivation, with a fast pace and no nonsense. The heroine speaks modern dialect, and was mistaken by her mother for being ill. She attracted Doctor Wang and was entrusted to take Doctor Wang's son to participate in the selection of immortals. The first three chapters are completely in line with the reading habits of online novels and have a strong sense of immersion. The only drawback is that the heroine is 28 years old and is a bit mentally retarded, but it is very funny. Just pretend that she traveled through time when she was 16 years old. Character setting: Female protagonist: Zhu Yao. She was a bit mentally retarded at the beginning, and her words and actions were not suitable for a 28-year-old. However, as the plot develops, it becomes very interesting later on. The male protagonist: Lord Yu Yan unconditionally dotes on his little apprentice and is the idol of the little girls. Male Supporting Role: Xiaoyi, who appears as a little beggar with dual spiritual roots and a villain, wants to destroy the world when he grows up, and the heroine tries every means to stop it. Male supporting actor: Wang Xuzhi, who was only seven or eight years old when he appeared. Because the heroine dragged him to attend the Immortal Family's Disciple Recruitment Conference, he subjectively believed that he should be responsible for the heroine. The heroine died saving him in the first life. Plot: The heroine has been reborn countless times after time travel, and finally completed the system tasks, rectified the order of the immortal world, established the Thunder Temple, and established the Immortal Execution Platform. Immortals are not allowed to kill in Taoism, otherwise their cultivation will be abolished. Summary: The plot is compact and interesting, and the three views are correct. Different from other immortality novels, it is the ideal world of little girls. It is a female channel book, and boys are also welcome to come in and have a look.

The first female channel book I read at Qidian. It was well written. The foreshadowing before and after, and the ups and downs of the plot are all very well written. Please encourage me.

I still remember this book after reading it for a long time. The content is clear and the main line is not confusing. Yu Yanzun is so cute. It is much more coherent than the common quick travel books. The ending can be regarded as a very good book about female channels. Good books about female channels are rare nowadays in the scumbag world. Don't be influenced by biased comments. After all, everyone has different preferences. There may be some people who don't like it.

"My Apprentice Died Again" is officially launched at 8 o'clock tonight. The content... Mary Sue is completely inconsistent with the original text. Poor You Qian greatly encourages the lovely You fans to get clicks, but You Da's heart is bleeding. Every novel is like her child, written bit by bit with her own hard work. Every big heart Everyone in the book had a dream of being a screenwriter, but obviously, the TV series was ruined... DaDa is very sad, and the readers are also very sad. I understand it especially, because I became a fan of DaDa from this book, and it has special meaning. You can complain and curse at will on the TV series barrage, but I hope your relatives will not take DaDa with you, okay? The novel is a novel and the TV series is a TV series. If we look at them separately, you will see the difference. The TV series strives to create the relaxed and funny feeling of the novel. The novel has its own light-hearted humor. After watching the TV series, you may find a novel that is so beautiful. "The Apprentice" is Dada's first novel and has received very high praise from everyone. It has even been made into a web drama (although I don't want to), but everyone wants to When I think about it, there are so many novels in the world, why DaDa's novels are favored. Although I haven't met a good crew or screenwriter, DaDa's novels can be recognized. Everyone can read novels freely and complain about TV series at will. Don't say bad things about DaDa with negative emotions, because this is DaDa's novel. She is sadder than anyone else. She is already so sad. Can you... Still bear to hurt her heart like this again? Bonus sentence: What should you do if you are unhappy? You Qian's novel is a pleasure to read! I have read every one of Da Da's novels, and any one of them can make you laugh out loud. Be a sensible book fan, starting from us. Good night everyone 😁😁😁, Da Da, can you give me a okay? /Shame/ And the last sentence: The copyright is not in your hands! The copyright is not in your hands! The copyright is not in your hands! Say important things three times😡

At first, I really felt that the female protagonist had a very upright outlook, and the plot and theme settings were really amazing. (So you say that the female protagonist, the Holy Virgin White Lotus, is called San Guan Zheng, then let's look at this matter under the premise of San Guan Zheng, although I don't care if she is the Holy Virgin and good-looking...) Until halfway through the plot, a male supporting actor named Yueying who became a demon appeared, which was inseparable from the female protagonist as an excuse to kill people and hurt people randomly. Complete He didn't listen to the heroine at all, didn't obey the command, and even killed the heroine twice (not indirectly). Afterwards, the heroine did nothing and simply taught him a lesson. Then Yueying just felt guilty for a second perfunctorily... (Of course, he didn't change his behavior even after teaching the male counterpart a lesson.) The two of them fell in love with each other and finished the dungeon together as if nothing had happened. Even the heroine is very brainless and prefers to protect Yueying. (The heroine has a little dog-licking dog called Shota that only points east and dares not hit the west. It has accompanied the heroine in rebirth several times, but its status is much lower than Yueying). I have heard of forced whitewashing, but I have never seen someone not washing it... Every time I see Yueying acting cute, I thought he would twitch to death in the next second, strangle the heroine and then kill the passerby... The heroine actually thought this action of his was very cute... Although I am a reader who agrees with NP and doesn't care about White Lotus's very low reading bottom line, I am not a masochist with a deformed view of love, am I? ? The heroine is surrounded by many beautiful men, which is indeed very enjoyable to watch, but she can't accept all rubbish. Finally, in fact, the author's story writing is really very good for women's videos. At least half of it, only the shadow of the moon, is very intriguing. Most of the articles are still worth reading. Everyone is not perfect. This is just an early work. The author is also growing and the readers are also growing. I hope the author will get better and better!

How can I put it this way? If you don't think too hard, it will be a very funny book, and the story is not bad. But if I insist on using normal people's thinking and logic, I almost dropped my phone╮(￣⊿￣)╭

I read it a long time ago, and I still remember it being a novel with an interesting setting. I thought the reviews would praise it, but the results were a lot weird. The character of the heroine is different from the decisive killing of mainstream immortals, but I think it is also very interesting and principled. No one stipulates that in the world of immortals, people must kill people by any means. The plot clues are very smooth and unconventional, and the emotional line is not cruel. Some plots left a deep impression on me. I read it as a cool article before, maybe it doesn't meet the coolness of some people? After all, everyone's reading style is different. Maybe people who are used to watching the protagonist destroy the world will feel that the heroine of this article is not in line with the setting of the novel about cultivating immortals. If they think it is inappropriate, there is no need to attack this novel like this. You can find something more suitable for you.

"，"，，                                                                If you are not a suitable group, you shouldn't criticize the works. I also watch male videos, but when I see works that I think are very toxic, I will quit directly. I will only put forward suggestions for improvements to works that I think are good-looking and want to follow them. If you don't like watching, there are many people who like to watch. If you don't like watching, just quit. It's too much to curse.         ""，，？ I think that only if the author deliberately skimps on the word count or writes perfunctorily, and the readers who pay money to read it are qualified to criticize the author from this aspect, this work can be seen that the author put his heart into the writing. I cannot agree with this behavior of criticizing the work just because I don't like to read the subsequent plot. And speaking from the work itself, the heroine's first reaction after seeing the bug is not to be angry, but to educate, isn't it a normal person's thought? Did she travel from modern times? Readers before changing the screen are at most a shark and a pig, right? Shark man? Seriously? Secondly, if there is a world of cultivating immortals in reality, there must be law enforcers like the police. If cultivating immortals is from the heart and you can do whatever you want, wouldn't the world be in chaos? Aren't mortals already extinct? One sword is like a mountain. And among the cultivators, there must be psychopaths similar to the shark-man criminals in reality, right? No one cares? Seriously? Again, those bugs have just been born, can't their fate be changed? They deserve to die for doing nothing? And the heroine knows that she can be resurrected, so dying a few times to educate bugs is nothing to her, right? Some people are beyond hope. Brainless cool articles are harmful to people.

Suddenly I realized that the people writing this book are all apprentices or even trainees. Have you finished reading this book? At least it has to reach the level of a fan like me (disciple, and I am into comics, so my level is a bit low). If you haven't finished reading it or read pirated copies, don't come here to criticize me. I can't support you free prostitutes at the beginning.

I feel like I often see readers who always talk about other people's holy fathers and holy mothers. If the plot of the novel does not take human lives easily, they will feel unsatisfied. They will argue with other readers about what is reality. I don't know whether it's because inferior novels and inferior games have too much influence on people, or because the social environment is not harmonious enough. They feel that they have to do whatever they want in the virtual world. Tit for tat is seen as the basic rule, and if the other person punches me, then I have to take off at least one of his arms. They like this "cool text". There are many such violent people in the comment area. They think they understand the nature of society, believe that selfishness and speaking with strength are the codes of conduct that should be followed in reality, and refuse to believe in goodwill and dedication. I think this is terrible.

The novel really shouldn't include too many buzzwords, otherwise it will look full of awkwardness and embarrassment a few years later... I mustered up the courage to read it several times, but every time I was so poisoned by it that I couldn't last more than three chapters 🙏

Is the heroine the Virgin Mary? It's as if the world's population can only increase and not decrease. The villain on the opposite side has killed people, but the heroine is still reluctant to get rid of him. She can't judge anything about this kind of thing, ha! I didn't realize that he couldn't be saved, okay? If you want to let him harm other people, don't say that you are doing something to save the world.

Forget it, I won't read it anymore. Both the heroine and the hero are very lovable. That is, the heroine is very kind. This kindness makes me feel uncomfortable. I prefer the Virgin and feel a bit hypocritical. Although she is not a Virgin bitch, I feel a little strange when reading the novel.

This book is purely funny, if you take it seriously you will lose 😏

I have read it three times, and I saw that there are so many people criticizing this book. I really like this book, and I think it has a different perspective. Those people who criticize me have not finished reading it, because all the books about cultivating immortals are about killing people, but this one is not included, so I think this book is just for the Holy Mother to criticize? This book explains why the protagonist doesn't kill anyone, because only those who do good are qualified to become immortals! In our myths and legends, only those with great merit can become immortals. It is because the world of immortals pursues the law of the jungle and kills people to seize treasures that the world is destroyed again and again. The world spirit asks the heroine to help save the world because she is different! If the heroine is also the kind of person who pursues her own strength and will kill anyone who offends her, what position will she take to re-establish the order of the fairy world in the end? If you want to read that kind of enjoyable writing, just leave. This book is not that type of writing! There are many articles of that type, and most of them are articles on immortality, so don't work hard to find articles that are not of that type!

I really like this article. Originally, my favorite novel about cultivating immortals is without CP, because as soon as the male protagonist appears, the female protagonist's IQ drops. This situation is too common, but the emotional line of this article is very cute, and the setting is very novel and unconventional.

I watched the TV series with a very tolerant attitude. I watched the first nine episodes and the last episode at 1.5X speed, and skipped the rest. To be honest, just like Tang Zhuan, he is selling sheep's head to dog meat. Except for the same name, they are basically two completely different stories, but Tang Zhuan's acting skills and the story's logic are pretty good. In our drama, the actors themselves are definitely not ugly, but their appearance is not very good. The male protagonist always feels that he is one shade darker than others, his face is yellowish, and he always feels that he looks very bad. The key is that the male actor may be too young and has the wrong temperament. In addition, the adapted plot is really flawed in logic. Just to give an example, the leader of Tiance Sect was poisoned to death by a glass of poisonous wine by Xiao Yi like a child, and then Xiao Yi became the leader. Then after Xiao Yi became the leader, he openly went to the Qiugu sect to take training classes to find the heroine. Anyway, I am quite confused about this place. The Qiugu Sect and the Tiance Sect are enemies. The Qiugu Sect looks like Wangjia Town. Anyone can come and leave as they please. Then let's talk about the main story. It was adapted into a game where the heroine enters the game world and takes Yuyan as her teacher, fighting monsters and leveling up along the way. Yuyan was originally the protagonist of the game. Later, the game needed to be revised due to the request of the management, so the protagonist was changed, so Yuyan was deleted and Xiao Yi was replaced as the protagonist. As a result, the code that was about to be deleted developed its own consciousness and became a game bug. Its name is World Spirit, and it is the main villain of the show. The heroine suffered from depression (probably) because of the game revision, so she went to a psychiatrist to erase this memory. The new version of the game also has a new Yuyan. The heroine enters the game for the second time and falls in love with the new Yuyan again. Xiao Yi also falls in love with him because of her early interaction with Xiao Yi. So a lot of the plot is driven by two men competing for one woman. Because the bug has never been found, the game cannot be launched online and is in danger of being deleted. Later, both Xiao Yi and Yu Yan learned the truth and worked with the heroine to find and eliminate the bug. The story is roughly like this. Only the "Xiaoyi" part of the original story has been adapted, but not the rest. Some characters have been deleted and some original characters have been added. The heroine also died, many times, and every time she died, she returned to reality.

I listened to it on Ximalaya FM, broadcast by Qingling. The quality of the program and the early stage are very good. I planned to subscribe for a fee. Hearing the conversation with the world spirit poisoned me to death. Xiao Yi shows mercy at every turn and is the villain who destroys the world. He was actually called the protagonist. After a little review of the comments, it seems that the protagonist's subsequent deaths were brought about by himself. Yuyan was really right, she was really stupid to a certain extent. Think you are a crow? Invincible? Maybe women don't love men if they're not bad? In my opinion, he is just playing with emotions and a perfect example of a scumbag. If you love me, you have to give, you have to be tolerant, and you have to use sweet words. There are many women who like this, and even post it in reverse? I have read harem stories, and I have also read female channel stories, but this time I really had a different opinion. I was wrong. I thought this was a buried work, and I voted for it every day. The result was a reshaping of the outlook on life, which disturbed me.

I heard that a TV series was coming out, so I went to watch it. It made me suspect that I had read a fake novel. It was very different from the novel, and the appearance was very low😅

The heroine has a problem with her outlook on life. She just saw the little fat man almost beating Linglong to death. Xiao Yi stepped in and almost crippled the little fat man. But the result was so stupid. Xiao Yi's cultivation was actually crippled. The heroine thought she helped Xiao Yi out of the siege. I can only laugh!

After reading these 9 pictures, if you think there is no problem, you can continue reading. If you can't stand it, don't read it, because this is what the author thinks is normal

I have a misanthropy disorder and can't see a bit of it 🙂

The TV series has been changed so much that I'm speechless. Why can't it be the same as the novel?