The plot is a bit slow, and the sense of conflict is not strong. It's a bit unpleasant to watch, but the plot design is still good. Keep at it. It's not easy to become a god by writing a classic. I [20, 6, 316, 26, 49,] will give you some suggestions.
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The plot is a bit slow, and the sense of conflict is not strong. It's a bit unpleasant to watch, but the plot design is still good. Keep at it. It's not easy to become a god by writing a classic. I [20, 6, 316, 26, 49,] will give you some suggestions.