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Let's talk about my personal opinion. The overall structure of the article is actually quite good. The author's text descriptions and characterizations are also quite vivid. However, as a novel about football competition, the author's direction is a bit biased. He spends too much writing to describe and explain things at all levels, which leads to too little writing about the game process at the football competition level. Most of a season and a game are describing how this is, what the mentality was at that time, and why there is such a view. However, the proportion of the description of the real game process is too small, which is a bit putting the cart before the horse! Secondly, the author's description of Arsenal in the Premier League is actually a bit biased. Let's not talk about the issue of labor certificates. The special genius clause was only passed in 2003. At that time, Sir Alex once said, "If it weren't for the damn labor certificate, Kaká would not have appeared in AC Milan." Ignore this for the moment, just think that the author is here to pave the way for the protagonist to go to the Premier League! But the deviation in describing Arsenal is very surprising! First of all, the construction of Arsenal's new stadium started in 2003. Before that, the professors did not blindly train little demons. They had preferences but were not persistent. Secondly, before Vieira left Arsenal, Arsenal's style of play was not actually "soft". They claimed to be playing like mercury. Attack, but their number of red cards is also at the forefront, not to mention that not all the five defensive players have retired, so this is also one of the reasons why Arsenal players have been seriously injured almost every season since Vieira left the team, and the injuries continue. They have been "revenged" and come back! The author is using the image of Arsenal given to the world after that to describe the Arsenal before. Such a deviation will make people jump out of their wits! The above is only my personal opinion
[Comment] Women's football team won the championship
The women's football team collapsed twice that year. I'm afraid many young people simply don't know the glory and regrets of the women's football team back then. Although it is in the novel, it can be regarded as fulfilling a dream of an old guy like me.
Double wear? If you don't like the dual protagonists, they will weaken the halo of the protagonists.
Everything else doesn't matter, except that professional football players don't have taboos and drink alcohol which is annoying.
[Comment] Your style is a bit like dreaming
To be honest, the competition is relatively cold now, so you can write about other topics and read this one every day.
[Comment] 10 votes
Come on, I remember that England was the champion in the 1997 Four Nations Invitational Tournament.
[Comment] 10 recommendation votes + full subscription
Don't be discouraged, come on! [Fn=2_3]
[Comment] Great book, hope to keep up the good work!
I just came across this book recently. The writing is actually quite unique and worth reading. It's just that the early domestic chapters and the juvenile chapters are too long, which makes people feel bored. I'm afraid there will be many people who won't like it – including me. Also, there are so many stories about men and women that are romantic and urban, and I think many people are a little impatient like me. As a result, I skipped ahead and arrived at Kaiser in one fell swoop. Forgive me for reading a few chapters earlier - skipping to read, but I should read the original version below. Only not at the starting point, but at creation. My account is not for reading books. I want to ask a question. The protagonist has found three people who are older than each other. What should I do when they get old? I hope Ye Qing Yu Nuan will get better and better as she writes! 🤭
[Comment] Keep it up
Keep at it, the update pace can be slowed down a bit. I really like what you write. As long as you keep at it, the votes and likes will always be yours.
[Comment] Happy New Year and feel proud!
I wish all my book friends a happy and prosperous New Year!
[Comment] I feel like it's not the right time to go to the Premier League
The experience of the two national brands is definitely not enough to meet the requirements for a labor certificate. The labor certificate was required in 1994, and the special genius clause was only activated in 2003. What is the reason for going to the Premier League to obtain a labor certificate? Around 1998, the Premier League was not very influential. In 1999, Manchester United won the Champions League treble and its influence began to spread. Before that, only Guangdong had Premier League broadcasts in China. Fans in Guangdong were relatively familiar with the Premier League teams, but other domestic fans probably were not.
[Comment] Say something, I hope it won't hurt the author!
I have always thought that I am a very tolerant person, and I think it is sometimes necessary to treat abusers. But author, do you think it is really necessary to make a good story so unpleasant? Is it really necessary to have a big reversal every three days? What you are reversing is not the story, but the readers' mood while reading the book, right? I originally thought that this season was going to have a smooth story! As a result, it happens again! This is a competitive novel, and competition is the theme. How can you still compete when you are injured, upset, fighting with coaches, teammates, and the media all day long? Also, since you are writing about two protagonists (perhaps you think it is a single protagonist), you have to give the two protagonists a chance to perform in the same scene, right? Why now, except when I was a teenager, I almost never see them perform together? Forget it, I won't say it anymore, because I don't know what I should say anymore! 🤝
Looking at the title, if one goal can't make the difference, then two goals?
Come on, look forward to the new book!
RT, I hope the next book can still accompany me for many years!
You, you, you..., The author is not kind, he stopped abruptly, and made it neither up to down... Too many places were gone before they were developed, gone, gone!
Potato, why is it so difficult to make some money now? There are not as many opportunities as you who were born in the 1980s. Were you ever confused when you were in your twenties?
Each line has its own story. But the best in every industry have something in common.
More than four million words were written and only 210,000 people read it? '
[Comment] I hope the author can come in and take a look! ! !
The author of Ye Qing Yu Nuan is much more professional than other football novel authors, which is a good advantage. The characteristics of this book are also distinct. The protagonists of the two brothers travel through time, which is very interesting. But why do I no longer want to watch it? Because the plot is too protracted, this is an online novel that makes people enjoy reading it, and the progress is too slow. Also, since it is a time-travel with two protagonists, it is really tiring to play football with a group of young athletes and engage in various tactics and so on. The skills of the children are not much different, and the physical strength of the country is not much different. There are two more brother time-travelers who have been playing together for more than ten years and they can't completely abuse other people. I really don't know what to say. There is no one who has a single protagonist who can time-travel. I like the author very much and would like to be able to improve or answer me.
[Comment] Alas, what a great book, what a pity
It's been a long time since I've found a book that suits my taste. It's a pity.
[Comment] Lampard's IQ
As far as I know, Lampard's IQ of 150+ is just a loose test of the players by Chelsea's internal team doctor. It is not an internationally accepted IQ test. At most, it is a joke or a gimmick, although Lampard himself plays pretty well.
[Comment] This is such a great idea
It's such a big idea to connect the Swedish agent in the Greenham bribery incident with Ibrahimovic's agent. Was Ibrahimovic's agent really Mendes at the time? Did he really bribe Greenham? No detailed information about the Swedish agent can be found online. 😃
[Comment] You must stick to it
I went on a trip some time ago, and the recommendation tickets and the like were not normal. I will make up for it and give you a reward. Brothers, you must stick to it! Although your writing is slow-paced, niche, and not in line with the current environment, the old guys are supporting you!
[Comment] Congratulations on the first anniversary of its launch
[Fn=2_3]If I hadn't seen the reminder at the end, I wouldn't have known it was already one year anniversary. It's not easy to persevere in such a bleak situation! ❤️
The author has written the competition into prose, haha, he is very attentive, but it is too nagging, and there are too many things to say. It feels like it is not a story, but the author's diary. The sense of immersion is very poor, and it is normal to have poor grades, but keep it up ^0^~
New book release at the end of July?
Have you set a date yet? The name of the new book? Type?
[Comment] Tell me what you think
I have written more than two million words, and the subscriptions are terrible, which is enough to illustrate the problem. This book is too niche. The plot advances slowly, the main line is unclear, and there is a lack of exciting elements such as slap in the face, etc., Including the fact that the Ku Klux Klan is now popular, but you have always been a big deal, and many of your things are not commercial enough. Those of us who can see the present are looking at that old time. I think if it is due to the pressure in life, you can start a new book and learn from the experience of this book. This book can be updated slowly, as long as it is not under supervision, and it can be used as a common memory for us old people.
It looks like it is almost finished. It has a good beginning and a good ending. Thank you to the author for your hard work. There are not many good football articles left. I have lost one book to read.
It's almost, it's almost. By the way, this World Cup is over. Has Tudou won the prize?
[Comment]Another book to ask for
It feels like another quest to me. It can be said to be the best football novel I have read so far.