The Legend of the Martial Ancestor Who Swallowed the Starry Sky

Is Luo Feng the protagonist's father? You can't snatch this opportunity, and you can't snatch that opportunity either! What the hell are you writing if you don't want to grab anything? What a great book. It looked good at first, but ended up making the main character a passerby! I'm confused, is Luo Feng your ancestor? You don't dare to touch his opportunities. How can people continue to read what you write like this? This is too poisonous! ! I can't afford to offend you. Goodbye.

The writing is very nice, but why are there always some self-righteous trolls who troll everywhere?

It's so hypocritical. You can't rob this one and you can't rob that one. Even if you rob it, so what? Liu Muxin is a weed spawned by Muya Crystal, and the inheritance of Death Ink Star is something that can be copied without restriction. Can this be considered robbery? The protagonist is a good-for-nothing good-for-nothing who travels through time and is swallowed up. He has no golden fingers. Why not take advantage of these opportunities and wait to die of old age?

The protagonist is just like a pig, stupid and useless

The protagonist has low intelligence and is stupid enough. Goodbye

This author is also a talented person. There are only dozens of comments in the comment area, and most of them are good reviews. Are you being a stupid reader? Although I haven't read it yet, judging from the comments section, I wonder if this book can't kill me.

I was really speechless when I saw the chapter on the extraterrestrial battlefield. The protagonist is a world lord, and the immortal foreign race can be killed with one blow. Are you kidding me? There is not even a process of annihilation of divine power. If the immortal dies so easily, is it still immortal? In the original work, Luo Feng relied on poison to consume the immortal's divine power to kill the immortal prince. But here, he can be destroyed with one sword. Is this a martial arts novel?

Very simple point. By snatching the opportunity from Luo Feng, can we guarantee that the problems solved by Luo Feng's original work will be solved? Luo Feng is such a genius. The original work still relied heavily on luck along the way. You cannot have the confidence that you are definitely better than Luo Feng and can solve those crises. Just don't grab it. The problem is having that confidence. Even stronger than Luo Feng. Still grabbing it? Not to mention the distant beasts. The recent crisis of the earth's people being enslaved, and the crisis of being occupied by the Lord of the Universe. You solve it. If you take Luo Feng's benefits, you cannot bear Luo Feng's responsibility. Then don't call him a man. And you have to be 100% sure of me before you can take it. Because Luo Feng's original work has all been solved. But you can't determine your protagonist. You have to make sure you can solve it too. Or maybe it's just for your own momentary pleasure. Putting yourself and everyone else on the planet at risk of being enslaved. It is pure "birth"

At the beginning, I saw Hong Hui arresting and slicing a martial artist just because he made rapid progress... And died of poisoning. Not to mention that Hong and Thor's setting is to fight for the survival of all mankind, and the faster anyone progresses, the more support they receive, so it is not so dark at all... Just looking at the gap, if you are not a god of war, you are not even an ant (you can't even remember the name), how can you be so inflated as a warrior that you are afraid that others will harm you? Absurd to the extreme…

And, Luo Feng is already an ancestor, he is still a loser, withdraw, withdraw

The protagonist's master has been dead for millions of years, and the protagonist's senior brother Kodi has been dead for tens of thousands of epochs. Which of them will die first?

A time traveler has no golden fingers, rubbish talent, and no chance. When you encounter an opportunity, you say it belongs to the protagonist. I'm sorry, brother, what did you do in time travel? Isn't it good to commit suicide and go back?

Chapter 66 is really ****, knowing the outcome and still causing trouble like that. I feel IQ is lacking

The protagonist cries and fusses like a woman

I also think it's okay among fans. I have to compare it with the original plot. The trolls always have various reasons and various evidences. I just laughed. Just don't read the ones that don't suit you. What qualifications do you have to troll here? If it doesn't suit your taste, just write one that suits your own taste better.

Brothers, if you have money, make money together, don't eat alone

This is probably the earliest Devouring fanfic I've ever written (or one of them), and it's normal to be a bit toxic.

This book has no highlights at all. It just writes about the enhanced version of Luo Feng and Wu Zu. Don't be fooled.

The protagonist is like a child. Was he still a member of the country's special department before time travel? If all the country's special departments were like the protagonist, they would all be destroyed. .

1. In the section where the mountain guest presents treasures, why are only two top-level treasures given? Who is the author looking down on? Emperor Yan and Luo Feng both have at least the most powerful weapons, so why should they give the protagonist a top weapon? 2. The most powerful treasure of the Zerg Queen is the Queen's Palace. How did it become the Queen's Thorn? A weapon, a palace, nothing different! If it were the Queen's Palace, would the protagonist dare to kill the Zerg? Can't you run away if you can't fight? Is there any way for the protagonist to get the most powerful palace treasure?

Devouring the same article recommends a book "Xiaoyao Emperor", the protagonist is also Yang Wu

As for Rong Jun's enemy, I guess it's Juaxe. Judging from the appearance description, he is from the same lineage as Juaxe and has not run away. However, the original book does not say that Juaxe has any clansmen, and Rongjun's lineage is just average. It doesn't look like he is a big shot at all. However, he was accepted as a disciple by the Lord of the Universe. His talent was obviously not the best at the time, so it is possible that Juaxe was behind it, or he knew his relationship with Juaxe. The relationship is most likely a father-son relationship, a bloody plot. For some reason, Giant Ax found Rong Jun's mother. Later, his mother died due to a series of reasons. Then he ran away from home and wandered alone. Later, Giant Ax died because the world beast died, so the matter was dropped. Originally Tomato wanted to write it, but the plot was too fast in the later period, and many foreshadowings were cancelled. In order to advance the plot, Giant Ax could only be written to death, and the issue of Rong Jun was shelved.

I guess the secret method of cutting off the Delhi clone is a magical power. The author forcibly changed the original work for this magical power.

I have rewarded 100 points, and I can use the treasure to use it. Friends who are in a book shortage can go and read another book on the theme of swallowing the starry sky, "The Great Age of Star Martial Arts". It is also well written, and I am also following it. It is very devouring, and it is not a fanfiction.

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

The writing of this novel is really awkward, and the layout of the text is even more incomprehensible.

I recommend a book called "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good~

It was a physical book I read when I was in elementary school. At that time, I thought this was the original version 😁

Um, the feud between Shiguo and Jin? Is this really a good explanation? I admit it. The guess is reasonable. You can tell by looking at what he chooses to pass on. If you don't pass it, you will die. Disciples who are of no use are abandoned. Selfish nature.

Is there a female protagonist? No, I'll leave early