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I endured the nausea and read Chapter 11. I died from the poison and was unable to complain.

If Wu Chengen had not written Journey to the West at that time, but someone in contemporary times had written Journey to the West, would Journey to the West have become popular?

The author's IQ is touching... I have only read Chapter 5... The author was criticized as a dog after reading the book review... It is very satisfying... What the hell is Chapter 5? It disgusts me to death... Sign the contract without even reading it? ? ? Can't continue writing? ? ? How did the author survive safely to such an old age? ? ? It's a miracle I didn't get tricked to death! ! ! Migrant workers all know to read the contract clearly before signing it! ! ! How come you haven't been beaten to death if your logical thinking is so clear? ? ? IQ is a good thing, but it's a pity that the author doesn't have it...

I have just read the second volume. Not to mention the writing style, it is the content that suffocates me to death. To be honest, the two sisters are quite selfish. They are considered the best relatives in a farming novel. I don't want to read the rest of it. I am simply too choked and panicked.

Don't write about the two girls who are the male protagonists, they might as well be passerby girls, ***, that's a little bit poisonous.

It's too childish, it feels like a primary school student writing a composition. The text is too childish and I can't stand it.

Chapter 62 is extremely poisonous and violates the character! At first I said I wouldn't fall in love before I turn 30, but now I'm making a three-year appointment and I will marry you!

It's really not a good habit to read a book without reading the comments. I almost felt sick to death when I saw Chapter 73. Two people did it for free for fame and they felt they had done nothing wrong. My brother had done so much for them and they still thought he didn't love them.

While saying that he doesn't want to be popular or enter the entertainment industry, he then jumps here and there, inexplicably, with too many poisonous points interspersed in between. Without these things, it would feel pretty good.

You are the second person I have commented on in so many years. It was okay at first, but the more I looked at it, the worse it became. What the hell? People who read this kind of book generally enjoy it. This is a cool article, haha. Are you going to have another arms pk later?

After seeing the point about the uselessness of reading in the first chapter, I didn't want to continue reading!

He has cancer and his parents still don't come to read what he wrote.

I don't want to read it. I've read Chapter 74 and don't know what to say.

This book is poisonous. The author is an ape who has not yet fully evolved.

Regardless of whether the book is good or bad, please don't ask yourself, and whether the author wants to write back to the classic songs of the ***** era, thank you

When I saw the songs I was going to release, I was already convinced to quit. There are so many classic songs. How about some saliva songs? That's awesome.

Encounter a beautiful woman in Chapter 9! Three thousand beauties in the harem

What's the starting point? Can such a book be distributed?

After reading Chapter 13 of Volume 2, I really can't stand it anymore!

😄 Dear readers, I would like to tell you that you should not treat this as some academic terminology. Is this still reading novels? Why don't you buy a copy and go home to read it? Does the author still have some ability to make me, an old bookworm, feel slightly sad when I read it? Even if something illogical comes up in the future, I think everyone will just laugh it off! Everyone remember this is just a novel. . [Fn=2_5][fn=2_5][fn=2_5]

I watched a lot of female protagonists for a long time, and when the protagonist got into trouble, I felt dizzy. I thought it was a harem story, and in the end I said

I've seen it before and I've fallen and been rescued, but I really couldn't stand it. A few years later, I saw a recommendation and clicked in. I watched a section that reminded me of what I'd seen before. I kept watching it for less than an hour and really couldn't stand it anymore. It was too toxic. It's the first time in so many years that I wanted to complain so much but I couldn't. It's also the first time I've written this long. . .

But, but, actually, how many times do you have to write a chapter? It sounds very uncomfortable, forget to improve 😁😁😁

It feels like vernacular writing

This is a 14-year-old book, everyone.

The subject matter of this book is good, but the author's logic in writing the book and the logic of the content are so poor that it goes against common sense and is a waste of a good subject matter.

It seems like I'm reading an outline. Probably because of its age, the selection of materials is also relatively old-fashioned, the writing is too fast-paced and looks like a running account, and the characters are flat and look like NPCs. Above

The protagonist, the Virgin, doesn't look like a human being! Enough of all the traps.

The plot is not good, the rhythm is not tight and the connections are too blunt, and the character dialogue is plainer than boiled water...

If you don't have the ability to write, then don't blabber, come on! Even if you are too bad, I will only have six words. Come and write. [Fn=2_4][fn=2_4][fn=2_4][fn=2_4][fn=2_4][fn=2_4]