Reborn as the Demon King

I am often caught by people at every turn, and I am quite speechless when thinking about life and death.

Chapter 62: What's the point of swallowing unknown pills at will? I was obviously so cautious before, giving up temptation and choosing stability. Why do you turn around and become dumbfounded? I hate that in many novels, the protagonist screams that he is going to fight, and then rushes to the next level or something. . This way you won't die or get hurt, which is illogical. Also, what do you mean by forgetting and not asking General Yin for advice? Such recklessness is inconsistent with the previous description.

After reading more than 60 chapters, there are no two points, all kinds of messy explanations, and there are still a few chapters missing. Withdrawn

1. Let's first analyze the background setting. I felt familiar from the time Yin Shanjun appeared. I found that it was indeed the setting of the Taoist priests in Journey to the West. I immediately felt that it was quite good. Like those great gods, I already have my own world view. PS: And it can save you the trouble of resetting. However, there is no existing history or works to refer to in this book, which may reduce the sense of immersion. 2. In terms of the design of the protagonist, I first felt that the protagonist would develop in the direction of Kong Xuan, such as being endorsed by Kong Xuan. At first glance, I even thought the bell was the Donghuang Bell. From this perspective, the choice of chicken is still reasonable. But I personally feel that choosing a chicken as the protagonist is not easy to develop. For example, the chicken brothers in the story are a bit far-fetched, and the subsequent section of improving cultivation is the same as mentioned above, with a low sense of substitution. At least I feel it is not as good as the previous section of the Three Kingdoms. 3. Environmental analysis, which appears directly in Yinshan Jun, Kong Family, etc., Is indeed attractive to old readers, but considering that these two places are not suitable for novice villages, because the teammates and enemies are too strong, the strength of the protagonist can be ignored, and the struggle and emotional line between monsters are more difficult to develop, so it can be regarded as having advantages and disadvantages. 4. The plot is promoted. It can be seen that the protagonist can see that the exciting chicken life is about to begin, but since there is no ready-made plot or gradual advancement, it feels a bit stiff and does not fit the current passionate, rational, dark, or progressive readings.

This protagonist is really frustrated. He behaves like a college student. He thinks a lot and doesn't know how to behave. He doesn't have the same temperament as Song Jiang. He doesn't have a main character. I downloaded Qidian specifically to complain. I know clearly that it happened after Journey to the West. I can deduce a lot of things based on clues and memories. I know a lot of Tao Te Ching, but I still haven't tried them one by one.

When I saw Chapter 37, I felt very excited. . . . Author Niu

There is no ghost after chapter thirty-nine until chapter forty-four.

There is a reason why the protagonist is not doing well! What can a chicken learn from following a cultivator?

I don't know about the later stage, but the plot twist in the early stage is too blunt.

It feels good that the subject matter is from the perspective of animals, but why not start from the egg? Then the subsequent plot is too tight, with constant encounters. After escaping from the human village, you encounter a monster. After meeting the monster, you are put into the valley. After leaving the valley, you are captured again. Is the pig's foot mold possessed? It hurts to watch. If it were like this, those monsters with a little bit of cultivation would be eaten before they transformed. The dialogue between General Yin and his apprentice is even more ridiculous. He is not like a normal monster at all. He does not prey on the weak, he is more like a human being, and his sense of morality is higher than that of a human being. There is something wrong with the social structure conceived by the author. Everything is too rational and orderly. A society with monsters, an ancient society, feels more organized than modern society.