Reborn as the Demon King

In fact, the writing is good, and the plot design in the early and middle stages is better than most short stories. I personally think there are several reasons why the performance is not good: 1. The protagonist's character image is not established well. It feels like the protagonist is not leading the plot, but the protagonist is forced by the plot. This gives people the impression that the protagonist is very passive, which makes people feel uncomfortable. The reason for this result, I guess, is that the author first thought of several plots and then forced them to be strung together. However, the personalities of the protagonists in these original plots all conflicted with each other, causing them to be separated from each other. It seems that the protagonist is brave at one moment, cowardly at another, strong and unyielding at another, and resigned to his fate at the next! 2. The beginning is a little bit poisonous. Both the protagonist's parents were eaten by Taoist priests, and the protagonist still wants to learn spiritual practice from the Taoist priest... He doesn't seem to want to go back for revenge after he becomes more powerful. . . Also, the Taoist priest talked so much about his past to himself in front of the protagonist. The protagonist was not even wary of such an abnormal behavior, and it also seemed that the protagonist was too stupid. 3. The protagonist still lacks motivation. He feels that he practices cultivation, becomes a king, etc., And it is all because others ask him, or even force him to do so, so he does so. Rather than the protagonist himself having any strong motivation to do so. The result of this will not only make readers feel that the protagonist is too passive, but also make readers feel bored and have no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot.

Chapter 62: What's the point of swallowing unknown pills at will? I was obviously so cautious before, giving up temptation and choosing stability. Why do you turn around and become dumbfounded? I hate that in many novels, the protagonist screams that he is going to fight, and then rushes to the next level or something. . This way you won't die or get hurt, which is illogical. Also, what do you mean by forgetting and not asking General Yin for advice? Such recklessness is inconsistent with the previous description.

I am often caught by people at every turn, and I am quite speechless when thinking about life and death.

After reading more than 60 chapters, there are no two points, all kinds of messy explanations, and there are still a few chapters missing. Withdrawn

1. Let's first analyze the background setting. I felt familiar from the time Yin Shanjun appeared. I found that it was indeed the setting of the Taoist priests in Journey to the West. I immediately felt that it was quite good. Like those great gods, I already have my own world view. PS: And it can save you the trouble of resetting. However, there is no existing history or works to refer to in this book, which may reduce the sense of immersion. 2. In terms of the design of the protagonist, I first felt that the protagonist would develop in the direction of Kong Xuan, such as being endorsed by Kong Xuan. At first glance, I even thought the bell was the Donghuang Bell. From this perspective, the choice of chicken is still reasonable. But I personally feel that choosing a chicken as the protagonist is not easy to develop. For example, the chicken brothers in the story are a bit far-fetched, and the subsequent section of improving cultivation is the same as mentioned above, with a low sense of substitution. At least I feel it is not as good as the previous section of the Three Kingdoms. 3. Environmental analysis, which appears directly in Yinshan Jun, Kong Family, etc., Is indeed attractive to old readers, but considering that these two places are not suitable for novice villages, because the teammates and enemies are too strong, the strength of the protagonist can be ignored, and the struggle and emotional line between monsters are more difficult to develop, so it can be regarded as having advantages and disadvantages. 4. The plot is promoted. It can be seen that the protagonist can see that the exciting chicken life is about to begin, but since there is no ready-made plot or gradual advancement, it feels a bit stiff and does not fit the current passionate, rational, dark, or progressive readings.

There is no ghost after chapter thirty-nine until chapter forty-four.

It feels good that the subject matter is from the perspective of animals, but why not start from the egg? Then the subsequent plot is too tight, with constant encounters. After escaping from the human village, you encounter a monster. After meeting the monster, you are put into the valley. After leaving the valley, you are captured again. Is the pig's foot mold possessed? It hurts to watch. If it were like this, those monsters with a little bit of cultivation would be eaten before they transformed. The dialogue between General Yin and his apprentice is even more ridiculous. He is not like a normal monster at all. He does not prey on the weak, he is more like a human being, and his sense of morality is higher than that of a human being. There is something wrong with the social structure conceived by the author. Everything is too rational and orderly. A society with monsters, an ancient society, feels more organized than modern society.

It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing this book.

This protagonist is really frustrated. He behaves like a college student. He thinks a lot and doesn't know how to behave. He doesn't have the same temperament as Song Jiang. He doesn't have a main character. I downloaded Qidian specifically to complain. I know clearly that it happened after Journey to the West. I can deduce a lot of things based on clues and memories. I know a lot of Tao Te Ching, but I still haven't tried them one by one.

There is a reason why the protagonist is not doing well! What can a chicken learn from following a cultivator?

I don't know about the later stage, but the plot twist in the early stage is too blunt.

When I saw Chapter 37, I felt very excited. . . . Author Niu

The books are becoming more and more interesting, but unfortunately not many people seem to read them.

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The writing is too depressing. Linghu Chong's rise is difficult to write about, and it's not attractive. I don't want to scroll down after reading this.

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1. In "The Taoist Priest in Journey to the West", is it said that the younger brother of the Bull Demon King is also a quasi-sage? 12

Demon King. . . The one in Bulgaria?

I gave up after reading the first few chapters. Killing your parents? Still unlucky?

Isn't the younger brother of the Bull Demon King also a quasi-sage? 2 The Bull Demon King is also the owner of the system. He has many emperor points and has a high status in the Jie Jiao. Why not summon a Jie Jiao master?

Isn't the younger brother of the Bull Demon King also a quasi-sage? Why do you say he is the only one with Dapeng?

1 Aren't the Jiao Demon King and others brothers of the Bull Demon King? Their relationship should at least be much better than with the disciples and the protagonist. Changle is also considered their granddaughter. If they don't help the Bull Demon King fight the protagonist, it's okay. How do these juniors of the Nine Spirits confront the Bull Demon King? To protect the protagonist 3, I think the requirement to become a quasi-sage is unreasonable. I remember that Ma Fan had just defeated Qingxu when the quasi-sage was almost invincible. As soon as Yuan came on the scene, he was unable to stop him. Or Tongtian also came out before Yuan stopped. Ma Fan thought that Yuan had disturbed him. How could Da Luo block the attack of a holy magic weapon?

I remember that Ma Fan had just defeated Qingxu when the Quasi-Saint was about to become invincible. As soon as Yuan Yuan appeared, he was unable to block him. Tongtian also came out before Yuan Yuan stopped. Ma Fan thought Yuan Yuan had disturbed him. How could Da Luo block the attack of a holy magic weapon?

Why doesn't Taiyin Yuanjun look for Tongtian?