Tiance

It feels so boring and totally out of tune with Tiance. Moreover, the aura of the main character in it is too big, and it doesn't feel in line with ancient standards. Of course, it's okay to call it a fiction, but the way in which real history is interspersed into the text, and the original ancient poems are randomly combined and applied to the characters makes me feel very awkward and uncomfortable. Since I was a child, my family has been very strict on traditional poetry. I feel that traditional culture is being ruined, and I am very disgusted. The above is just my personal feeling, don't comment if you don't like it.

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Saw your updates again. Why are you always surfing the Internet? Have you completed your study tasks? Have you completed your work tasks? Aren't your parents worried about you? You should also think about your parents. It is not easy for your parents to raise you. Fortunately, they have worked so hard to bring you up to this age. Your parents' hair is turning gray day by day because of your life. They just want you to make a difference in the future, become the pillar of the country, contribute your own strength to your country, and at the same time let them enjoy their old age! ? If you go online without completing your study tasks, your parents and teachers will be worried about you. You must not be harmed by mobile phones and the Internet! Don't you have any sense of shame? Don't feel any guilt for what you did! ? These things are all false! You must overcome your urge to seek a sense of presence on online social platforms, and always remember that the strong come from within! It is not that finding solace for one's soul in this kind of online social platform can make the motherland stronger and parents happier! As an outstanding talent in the 21st century, you should do more practical things and enrich yourself with knowledge! You should think more about yourself. Nowadays, the pressure of social competition is so great. If you don't work hard to improve yourself, you will be ruthlessly eliminated by the general trend of society. How will you contribute to the motherland in the future, and what will you do to honor your parents in the future? In this case, won't all the hard work your parents have spent on you be in vain? Is this worthy of them? You should come out of the Internet world as soon as possible! Throw yourself into life and study!

It's good to write about martial arts with literature, write it well. Three votes in favor.

What a great book, keep up the good work, the author🌹🌹

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I knew it after reading Chapter 51. . . As for what I know, let's not talk about it for now.

Well, it's unique, the eight-clawed octopus is dangerous, the golden carp is helpless, and the protagonist's image is therefore tall. Praise! One vote in support.

Keep up the great work! Strong support

The novel contains a lot of traditional cultural heritage of the Chinese nation. It can be said to have a romantic style. The opening chapter is fascinating, the plot is cleverly laid out, and the writing is brilliant. It can be seen that the author does have good writing and imagination, and more importantly, the author's well-informed feelings are reflected in the novel, which is excellent! Stand up!

The stolen pear has a power outage at home today. I'll take a leave of absence on his behalf. I'll update as soon as he calls!

🌹 8 recommendations are given, please give me the essence 🌹

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I haven't felt this way for a long time. The last time I saw a book with ancient rhymes was Jing Keshou's "Qingdi" a long time ago. Dali's writing style is as good as Jing Keshou's.

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Well, because it's an oriental fantasy, it's best for the character's name to be an oriental name, not something like Michelangelo... Leave the skills, name, background, etc.~