The Most Powerful Elixir System

Chapter 49: Your younger brother is a way of calling someone else's younger brother. My younger brother should be called Brother She. There are too many current authors who are uneducated and do not have basic language skills.

The plot is average, the story is old-fashioned, the jokes are copied, it is often delayed, it is smelly and long, and it cannot arouse readers' thinking and resonance. The male protagonist is too ugly and there are too many female protagonists. Yes, I have not read this book, but it does not affect me at all bb

After watching a little bit, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has been picking up rags for a long time. Why does his character change so quickly? Suddenly he became glib and frivolous?

I don't know why, but someone who writes novels first always loves to write about school beauties, and his school beauties are the most beautiful in the world.

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Chapter 13 is missing, why is there no chapter 15?

Was it written by a primary school student? So many ideas, so childish

The part where the protagonist chases Liu Bing is really mean, pretending to be pitiful to gain sympathy, this approach is really hard to accept

An emperor who picks up rags... An orphan boss... A waste creation god... The pigs owned by the protagonist rise faster than the protagonist

I am speechless. I have read so many cultivation novels. This is the first time I heard that the aura of the Marrow Cleansing Pill can be wiped clean by shit. It is disgusting and unreasonable. Of course, it's up to the author how he writes it, and we have nothing to say about this setting. However, the system only reminds the protagonist after the protagonist has raised his aura to nine levels. This is really intolerable. This system, haha, I really don't know what to say.

How big should a chubby European Champion wear?

What a noob... He thinks that with the system, he can be invincible... As long as a beautiful woman meets him, he will become a born bitch!

In the world of cultivation, there is a woman called a witch. Then the author keeps emphasizing that the jade foot flies away with a flick of the jade foot, and the jade in your mother's body is enough to make your mother's pussy.

I gave up after reading the second chapter, Stallion, Meeting the School Beauty for the First Time. At first glance, it was all an article that was forced to show off.

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Junior high school composition level, the story is all based on bullshit, forced bullshit, don't want to compare too much

I couldn't stand the first chapter. This is the first book I have read in so many years.

Only read 4 chapters... The comments are really good

Well! I can't stand how the author wrote it.

It's so rubbish. I really can't stand it anymore. I really want to hold on, but I threw up after reading it. I'm sorry, brother author 😳

Absolutely support it! [Fn=2_3]

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Rubbish. I have been poisoned. You poor fellows, please continue.

I would like to ask if a novel must include a school beauty before it can be called a novel 😰 Novel Catalog School Beauty Next Book 😏

This kind of novel written by a girl really has no artistic conception and is so illogical. I have been putting up with it for a long time and I really can't stand it anymore.

What are you writing? This is it. I can't even read the second chapter.

Rise up! ! ! ~~~~~~~~

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Stand up! Collect! ! Getting more and more popular! ! !

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