Super Game Store System

Just give me a shout, let's be more powerful! Haha, no need to call back! Passing by Wuhen, drifting away again, holding up

Float by... Come on... Dodge again...

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Will Chang'an Ju hit me?[Fn=2_4]

I saw Pig's Knuckle leaving Phoenix, but I didn't see him using any of the blessed weapons. He was very proud of his reputation. Why didn't Pig's Knuckle fight against the five scum? If he fights a wild monster now, he will die or die? Or did I miss it and actually took it?

It looks great after taking a look! Then there are a total of 15 chapters in one chapter. . . 😭

Do you dare to sell women's vibrators? Don't you dare to sell men's airplanes? ~ 🤫

[Fn=2_5]X finish and run away~

Now the protagonist has a lot of enemies, but his own strength is too weak, and the holy sword can only be used as a comeback. The gods have fallen. The darkness is ready to move. It can no longer be upgraded slowly like in the game. I also feel that the usefulness of the store is too small. Since it is a theme, I hope it can be more useful. Don't be too tied up because of insufficient points. Use it more flexibly.

, The story is quite good, the concept is not cliché, and the plot is organized and has a main line. There are some shortcomings, especially at the beginning. There are jumps in many places. It is like watching a movie with a 50K Internet speed. One lag after one lag. It is really easy to drive away readers. It has been improved a lot later. There are also problems with the introduction. What kind of chamber of commerce to open, business development, etc. Is one of the content that readers hate the most. 9 Out of 10 people hate it when they see it. The author can feel free to do whatever he wants. It is inevitable to have shortcomings when writing a book for the first time, but it is a pity about the subject matter. Write what you like, forget it when you are tired, and gain some experience.

A good book worth reading to gain weight first 🤭

Be good little bear, Master Jiu is here to patrol!

I want to send you a message from the God of Light. Do you want free shipping?

From the moment he first met the protagonist, he was vicious and wanted to kill him, and was always against him. Then he was scared to death, and then he turned into a woman in the blink of an eye? Just because she is a woman, she cannot be attacked by the protagonist just because she is a woman. Does it make sense that the lower body is the same as that of an animal? Randy must die We must not let Randy clear his name

Two updates a day is really satisfying.