The Turbid Immortal

I really like books about kittens, and I also like kitten people. He has a very good personality, and I have called him. He is a very smart and wise person, which is simply inconsistent with his age. When I was in the most difficult time, Mao Mao enlightened me and helped me. I am very grateful to him. No one is a god, and there is no guarantee that every book will be a hit. Only when you walk through low-lying people and stand on high places can you deeply understand that victory is not easy. I am optimistic about Mao Mao. I always remember the sentence "Young man, you should become famous as soon as possible, otherwise you will be old soon!" It's so well written, come on, kitten!

How old were you seven years ago? So scary.

The Ouchi manager has decided it's you, go ahead!

Could it be that "Xiao Shichen, the founder of Zajia Academy," is the ancestor of those "father-in-laws"? 🤭 It sounds weird to read, so let's call it a miscellaneous scholar, O(∩_∩)O haha~

It took me more than 3 hours today to read all the updated text. It felt so good! The writing is really good, in short, I look forward to the update!!! Come on! Great article, don't miss it!!

It's like cramming in a bunch of settings at first. Although the idea is good, readers have to accept it slowly. It is very tiring to release it in one breath. It would be nice if various settings could appear with experience like the Misty Journey.

If there is a female protagonist, focus on describing the female protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, try to downplay or describe the female character as little as possible. The problem with the female protagonist in the previous book made me abandon it and read it again, abandon it and read it again, ****. Also, the introduction is very attractive ~ Anyway, good luck to the author

I was a little panicked after reading the book review, but I still wish the author good luck in writing. Regarding the female protagonist, if there is only one female protagonist, it is better to focus on the description of the female protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, the female protagonist should be as downplayed or appear as little as possible. The problem with the female protagonist made me give up and read again, give up and read again, desire? Immortality, desire, and death are talents.

If you are a bit of a literary youth, you will have new discoveries and achievements in learning and skills. Then why won't you stay? As for whether the test is not normal, should it be left to Gou Shinan who just tries his luck?

The rhythm has not stabilized. Traveling, competing, and entering the academy are the normal and stable results. However, it is written that during the competition, there was a sudden wave of beasts, they were tricked, they made enemies, they entered the army, killed the beasts, and the formation diagram revealed a conspiracy. For the new setting, it was very difficult to look at it, because I had never seen it before. My eyes read the words, and the pictures appeared in my mind, but the pictures appeared very difficult. I am completely confused about history. These skills and these words were difficult to read. I tried to understand them, and then the pictures appeared in my mind, which was even more difficult. Originally, we followed a normal and stable rhythm, although it is slower, but it allows us to have a process of acceptance. When we release skills, such as deafening, I can imagine it as ripples, but for nose piercing, I understand the literal meaning, but how to wear it, I have no idea in my mind. The image is very blurry, and the details of the fight are not enough. Moreover, the timeline was too tight. In ten days, so many things happened and so many things had to be explained. The pictures in my mind were overwhelmed and turned into mush. I hope it can stabilize a bit, give it a few months to stabilize, and don't make it so complicated with a 100,000-word article. It's complicated enough as it is.