The Best Son-In-Law

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😭 I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development of the story, but I feel like it's too little in one day. It's not enough to watch. Do you dare to give it a try? I don't know what will happen to Zhou Ning in the future. I'm looking forward to it.

I haven't seen the direction of this book yet, but I feel like you want the male protagonist to go into business. I don't know if you want the male protagonist to learn martial arts in the setting of this book, but I think a person who traveled from the future to ancient times would want to learn martial arts. For example, the author, if you had the opportunity, would you learn martial arts? Martial arts like in the novel? Anyway, if I have the chance, I will learn it, but the premise is true. Would a modern man like the male protagonist who traveled to ancient times and had no martial arts self-defense feel safe? I think you don't want the male protagonist to pursue a career in literature. After all, the only thing the male protagonist knows now is poetry. You didn't explain that the male protagonist knew music, chess, calligraphy and painting before time travel, so I think there is a high chance of a business career. Even if the male protagonist wants to learn martial arts now, there will be no progress in a short time. Even if he has a halo, it won't be much faster. If it is too fast, the book will be boring.

Many people say that when writing novels, money for less than 30,000 words is your talent; money for less than 50,000 words is still very good; when you persist until 100,000 words have not yet been collected, then let it go decisively; if you have no money for 200,000 words, why not throw your dream into the bucket decisively? ! What are you waiting for? ! Little Fatty doesn't know how, can't, let alone take off that hand! "Legend of Heaven" is Xiaopang's hard work, and Xiaopang will never let him die young. Finally, Xiaopang is here to implore all brothers and sisters. If you have any votes and rewards, even sincere comments in the book review section, or even if you scold Xiaopang bloody, please give more to Xiaopang... Just so that more people can see and pay attention to "Legend of Heaven". [Url=qQVza2]

In the two recently updated chapters, when it comes to sharing, you use percentage. In fact, I think it is best to use a few percent, 10%, and so on. Maybe this is just my personal opinion. Anyway, when I read fantasy historical novels, some authors used hours to introduce time. I felt a little awkward. Maybe it was because I was used to reading hours when I first read the novel. However, I feel that in ancient times, hours were used, and in fantasy, "breath" is used to refer to breathing. The type of your book Mystery is a parallel space, most of which is no different from the earth. . . . Ahem, I don't even know what that last sentence means. Anyway, it'll be nice if you understand it.

The writing style of the first and second volumes has been drastically changed, and I don't know how many people can adapt to it. As the author of this book, I feel that I have been writing the story very carefully, but the results have been very unsatisfactory, which almost made me lose the courage to continue writing. Here, I would like to ask the readers who have read this book, and the readers who have given it a thumbs up after just one glance. What is the reason that makes you lose interest in reading? What is it that makes you want to point out the movie when you see it? I hope you will feel free to give me your advice. If you have any suggestions or flaws about this book, please point them out here so that the author can know how to correct them. It's not scary to make mistakes. If you know your mistakes, you can correct them. There is no greater good...😃😃

This book... Looks like the handwriting of a master, I must support it! 👍

After reading these three chapters, overall I feel good and have no problems. I have a few suggestions. First of all, when the male protagonist plagiarizes poems from his previous life, he feels that he will copy them and it will become confusing. However, every time he says not to copy, he still ends up copying for various reasons. So I don't think it is necessary for you to do this. Now the male protagonist is following the principle of keeping a low profile. I don't want to copy poems and be in the limelight, but even if I say that those poems were obtained by chance, no one would believe it. Anyway, now that I am out of the limelight, I can no longer keep a low profile, so I should be high-profile. Why should a man be secretive in doing things? It is not a shameful thing. There is also the guilt of copying poems. After copying the poems, I feel guilty for a long time and I still copy them. Sometimes I have to accept the reality. Since I have been reborn, I should live a free and easy life. Why should I care about these guilt feelings? The male protagonist did not know those poets when he was alive. At worst, when the male protagonist becomes rich, he will burn more money for them 😃. People are selfish. For example, if a person dies or someone else dies, When you die, you often want others to die and let yourself live. If it is your parents or close brothers, you may die to let them live. But in the male protagonist's world, if the male protagonist can't even write poems, how can he survive in that world? Although he can make wine or something by relying on the memory of his past life, wouldn't he feel guilty doing tea leaves or something like this now? ! Well, that's it.