
Fullmetal Alchemy Knight
钢之炼金骑士
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 264k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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87Chapters
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[Comment]Tangled
I don't know why, but every time I look at the cover on my phone, I always see it as Meow Alchemy Knight 🤫
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[Comment] Author, you have stepped on the standard line that the article is not on topic.
Reading the titles of each chapter is a torture.
Negative one click count is awesome
[Comment] The focus of Fullmetal Alchemist should be on various formations, right?
There seem to be a few formations, maybe there are special arrangements? However, I suggest you improve the characteristics of Fullmetal Alchemist. Maybe it can add some new ideas, right? Anyway, cheers up! 🤝
[Comment] Did Yang Xiao devour Will or Will devour Yang Xiao?
Now it seems that Yang Xiao is dead. His mind is filled with Will's thoughts.
[Comment] The update is a flaw
If you don't have enough speed, you still dig holes like others.
[Comment] I came to see the Philosopher's Stone and the human body! ! ! ! !
I came to see the Philosopher's Stone and the human body! ! ! ! ! How strong I am! ! ! ! Long live the formation formation! ! ! ! ! 😁😄
[Comment] I just want to ask the protagonist if he has watched Steel? ? ? ! ! ! It would be easier if you saw it! ! ! ! !
I just want to ask the protagonist if he has watched Steel? ? ? ! ! ! It would be easier if you saw it! ! ! ! ! Hurry and practice the Philosopher's Stone! ! ! These orcs are good materials! ! ! 😄
[Comment] Actually, what I want to see is the last one in your profile.
Transvestite Will is pursued by gay men in various ways, yoooooo. Isn't Will dissatisfied with the puppet set? Let him run hundreds of laps around the unicorn dormitory in his wedding dress.
[Comment]Why is there always a girl who avoids marriage?
It's really boring. They are all fucked by men anyway, so what's the difference? The most ridiculous thing is the portrait of the protagonist in his previous life, which in my eyes is no different from an amnesia joke╮(╯▽╰)╭
[Comment]yoooo, sign the contract quickly
Sign a contract with me and become a magical girl yooooo Are you finally going to become a transvestite?
[Comment] The description of the ancestors in these two chapters is quite good (plus some suggestions)
The cuteness is quite well grasped, and the personality is displayed appropriately to be truly cute. Well, I am very optimistic about my ancestors! 👍
[Comments]-3-
🤭🤭 This little little sauce is here~ Meow Meow is here to greet you~~
[Comment] Well....
Although the cover is very good, I still like the original loli ***ww
[Comment]yoooo, cute boy
I didn't expect the author to have more serious tastes than me about that werewolf.
[Comment] Follow the vine and touch meow
I found an interesting novel, let's change parking spaces 🥺
[Comment] Those ridiculous things about Xiao Ai and Will
🌹Good afternoon, everyone. First of all, I want to know if what you are seeing is the new version... (If you are viewing it on a pirated website, or the content cached on the mobile phone may be different from the web version...) The plot of the old version of Elune was indeed abrupt, but after the revision, I feel quite satisfied with it. I admit it, I like dog blood. (Sorry, this is a personal hobby, no coincidence, this is what I insist on) Elune fell in love with Will at first sight. Maybe I haven't described it enough, but she is a woman who longs for freedom. She has the thinking of a modern girl, but was born in a feudal family, so she had to make her own choice, even though it was the relatively unfamiliar Will, but Will stood up and did what others did not do, just because Elune felt that "he is ten thousand times better than that Moria". For this reason, she fell in love with the male protagonist. She made her choice whether to return to her hometown honestly to get married and have children, or to have a vigorous love affair before that. As for why Will likes Elune... I think I have made it clear after revising the article. This is soul fusion, not simple soul penetration. Will likes the magician Shirley, and Elune looks similar to Yang Xiao's girlfriend. (Men are basically visual animals. If they like a woman, if that woman has a sister, the sister will kill the original partner and use it as a substitute to make herself superior. In fact, many men find a successor who looks similar to the original woman after their original partner dies.) This is like the previous life, the one you loved in the previous life, you can't just forget it in this life, right? Even though they look alike, you still have a bit of a grudge in your heart, right? Do you still have the heart to watch when you see the exact same person jumping into the fire pit, and besides, they have confessed to you? It can't be said that they like each other. Will has a good impression of her, or at least "doesn't want her to be unhappy", so he helps her. Finally, a friend of mine who reviewed the book said something like, "It's really boring. They're all fucked by men anyway, so what's the difference?" This made me very unhappy. (If you are a strong supporter of feudal arranged marriage, just pretend I didn't say this) Regardless, a girl, with just a little bit of IQ, knows how to choose between "scum" and "beloved". Moreover, so far in my book, I really have no intention of writing about the protagonist pushing any girls. Will may wander among a bunch of cute girls... But, leave something behind or something... I won't go down that stud road. What I want to write is a "love adventure magic comedy", not a harem sex scene. I hope to write it in a more joyful way, and also hope that it is full of warmth. I really hope to write some characters that everyone will like. (Of course I am taking a very bloody route. Of course, I have to show my personality. I still need experience...) In the end I felt quite happy. It's great that so many people have pointed out the imperfections in my writing. I'm not playing a single-player game~
[Comment] Big Tucao Tower
🌹If you like it or don't like it, please leave a message here. 🤝 Suggestions, typos, missing characters, if you find any, please let me know.
[Comment] Some suggestions for the author - long review
Before I suggest anything, I have something to say: First of all, if you don't agree with what I said, you can delete it. If you insult others, please respect yourself; However, this is advice and may seem a bit preachy, so I apologize in advance. However, this is not a troll, nor is it a personal attack, so if you do what you want, if you like to watch but don't want to leave, don't do this. So let's get to the point. The reason I clicked on this book was actually the title. The title of High Imitation Steelmaking aroused some interest in me. In Qidian, most of the titles of this type of high-imitation animation are misleading, but that doesn't matter. In my opinion, authors who deliberately use jokes in their titles and articles are more sincere than those who are XX Animation Tour, XX Animation Summons and the like. Then I read the latest chapter in one go, and I felt that I could read it, but there were problems. The problem is threefold: First, the writing style is vague and the audience positioning is unclear. Generally, those who write articles have a positioning in mind, as to what they want to write and who they want to write for. The author once asked the readers what they wanted to read in a single chapter. However, there are thousands of readers, and the answers given must be very different. Some may like the nerdy style of writing, some may like serious and hard-core writing, and some may be loyal fans of novice writing. Countless masters have told us through painful experiences that a book cannot please all readers. There are many cases where someone's fairy grass is my poison. However, when I read this book, I felt that the author wanted to please both sides. The author played with a lot of otaku-oriented jokes in the article, such as the title, the empty ears of the tiger-striped shark, and even the name of the male protagonist. If I guessed correctly, it should be Will, the handsome male protagonist from E Agency's work. But apart from this, the plots arranged by the author are some common plots in popular white texts nowadays. From the opening chapter where the male protagonist's girl is kidnapped by the boss, to entering the academy and starting to show off, to the runaway girl being caught by her fiancé, who is then slapped in the face by the protagonist, these scenes are all overflowing in the novel. Not to mention that the author also used a setting that is extremely unpopular in both otaku and white novels - after time travel, he meets a woman who looks very similar to a woman that the protagonist valued before time travel, and because of this reason, the protagonist begins to be very gentle towards this woman... Didn't you see that Tang Zhuan, who has always been at the top of the historical monthly vote list, wrote that the heroine looks very similar to the protagonist's previous wife, and then from the setting of this heroine to the protagonist's performance of looking at her differently, as well as some of the interactive plots between the male and female protagonists, it has been criticized many times. Therefore, whatever the author wants to write, the audience must be positioned well. Although no matter whether it is a novice, a hard-core, or a homebody, there are some things in common, but there must be a clear enough bias to tell the readers what kind of readers this book is for. Perhaps in the ancient era of online writing, these things were not so obvious, but things are different now. Readers are no longer the readers they were back then. Everyone has a benchmark in their mind for what they want to read, what type is their favorite, and what type can poison them. After reading online articles for so long, it is impossible to have no bias in taste. If you are a master who is good at manipulating words, it will be easy to adjust to the readers' tastes, such as Jin Yong and Gu Long, or the authors of some of the above-mentioned famous works. But judging from the writing style of this book, the author probably belongs to the clear and coherent category, and can tell the story clearly, but has no spare capacity to use words to reconcile different readers. Therefore, the result of trying to please both ends is that you cannot please both ends. The author writes this way. The plot may make everyone happy one minute, but the same group of people will die of poison the next minute. In this article, the advice to the author is very simple. Find out the positioning of your own readers and see what kind of readers are reading your books, that is, "stand in line." If the author has some prospects for results, he should not be in trouble with his current readers. Just like when Yue Guan wrote The Age of Great Controversy, he wanted to change the relationship from the feud between flowers to the tragedy of generosity, but he couldn't get rid of the romantic flavor no matter how he wrote it. He just wanted to expand new readers who like hard-core writing style, but ended up writing something completely different, which made it look very different.
[Comment] Ragdoll Bear, there has always been a shadow since I played a certain game
Four major BUG equipment, PK is invincible. Number 1: Praetorian Set. Whichever one you put on, the corresponding part will disappear. Wearing a complete set can deal damage to the head. Ranked second, the polar bear suit. There is no attack judgment from behind. If you are caught, you can hit him any way you want. You can fight for a long time without losing blood. After beating the opponent, you will have a skill that reaches full mana in seconds. Ranked third: raincoat fashion. There is no judgment on the lower body, just step on the trap and walk casually. It's surprisingly slippery and can slip out of your various combos. Feeling dizzy, petrified, and imprisoned, they are floating all over the sky. It's surprisingly tough and can take on a 12-player large dungeon BOSS. BOSS has all kinds of instant skills, including trench mounts, 100% recovery potion, sure kill, super sure kill, resurrection and death smash. If you are not careful, you will be instantly hit. Wearing a raincoat, all kinds of damage will not exceed three digits.
[Comment] The crew has hired people
😄🌹[f😚We are recruiting actors. The acting is so good. The format is the most annoying... Then just [name + settings]. The name must have Western characteristics. Currently only characters below level three are accepted. Anyone can come. The longer the setting, the harder it is to show up... The simpler, the easier it is to learn... Well...