Another World Martial Arts System

Well, regarding the issue of grades, it is true that there is no advertising. However, there may be some minor issues with the content, setting, and characters of this book. As an old bookworm, I am writing this for the first time in so many years, and I really can't bear to see it buried under this book. My views are my own and may not be accurate. If there is any mistake, please forgive me. I have only read more than forty chapters now. Overall, I feel that the author's handling of words and rhythm are good, and the reading feels very smooth. This alone beats most hydrology in an instant. This is worthy of recognition, but I still have some suggestions. 1. In the article, the protagonist is passively brought into the event. This is a passive plot advancement method, which is also used by most upgrade articles at present. The opposite is active advancement, where the protagonist's will and behavior drive the development of the plot. I don't think the so-called system tasks should constrain initiative. Maybe it's because the protagonist is still too weak now. I hope it can be improved in the future. 2. There is also the problem of systematic martial arts. The SS-level Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms mentioned by the protagonist at the beginning almost scared me away as an old bookworm. I imagine that the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms in a low-level martial arts world can be ranked among the peerless martial arts in the world of fighting spirit magic. This is simply a matter of beating a dog with a meat bun. I hope the author will consider Huang Yi or Hong Kong comic martial arts. 3. The issue of worldview. In just a few dozen chapters, the author shows a certain degree of "disdain" for the world of fighting spirit and magic. For example, when the heroine is poisoned, the protagonist determines that the poison is not very strong without seeing anyone. The reason is that he admires Chinese traditional medicine and people in this world are simply not worthy of powerful drugs. Don't you think those alchemists and thieves are all experts in this field? I don't have the habit of admiring foreign things, but I still have to be rational when looking at problems. Just like Chinese and Western medicine each have its own merits. 4. The last one is just a matter of personal taste. I just hope that the author will not turn the protagonist into a petty villain. It is really not worth it to be intimidated when he meets a woman with a little temper. No matter how you look at it, for a strange woman who has no acquaintance with each other and only trades with her, there is no reason to accommodate her willfulness and tease her. However, the current social atmosphere is such that it makes people speechless. The author should make the protagonist stronger. . . . . .

😊 The protagonist should not learn too much martial arts and bite off more than he can chew. It is just like playing a game. Each skill corresponds to a skill point. When the number of skill points is certain, training one to the top is much better than all level 1 skills. In addition, the top secret skills can be separated for the protagonist to learn, which will not only make the protagonist powerful but also have motivation. 🤝

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I'm so excited, brother, this book is the best book I've ever read, haha, brother, please update it quickly, I'm addicted to it.

I'm so excited, brother, this book is the best book I've ever read, haha, brother, please update it quickly, I'm addicted to it.

Oh, sister, this book is so good, why didn't I discover it earlier!

I'm so excited, brother, this book is the best book I've ever read, haha, brother, please update it quickly, I'm addicted to it.

Everyone who wants to write a story must have a different inner world from everyone else. What makes a writer insist on coding and write a story of millions of words? It's not boring, nor is it for the royalties, it's a hobby, it's the joy of sharing stories from your heart with readers! Especially for friends who are also newcomers, coding is relatively slow and their popularity is low. A compliment from a reader will make a newcomer extremely happy. Where there is praise, there will be criticism. Whether you are a master or a novice, you may or may not support your work. It is impossible to satisfy everyone. I guess you, the author, have also struggled with whether to describe a scene from sound to scene, or from scene to sound. When you write about some funny parts, do you think the readers will laugh? You think your writing is outstanding, but readers don't seem to notice it, so you are disappointed. I hope a reader can read your article carefully and analyze it carefully! Writing can improve one's own knowledge, enable people to understand things, and pay attention to the small details in life. Each person's personality characteristics can be exaggerated and written into the story. Although the author created a world, many events still have to be compared to the world we live in. Everyone's writing has its own sharpness, and everyone's story has its own merits, so you can see your own shortcomings in every article. Commenting on other people's articles not only provides support to the author, but also improves my own writing level and allows me to see my own shortcomings, so I will continue to read other people's works to improve myself. Having said so much, I hope the author will continue to write for his original hobby! Put aside the fame or not, just for the original hobby! Come on! 🌹🌹

I have been thinking that maybe everyone who writes stories has a story of their own in their hearts, either happy or sad. We hope to outline all of this bit by bit with our own hands in a world of our own, either implicitly or directly. Maybe when we first think of writing, our purposes at that moment may be different, or they may be the same. However, for those of us who have been persevering, what keeps us from stopping typing on the keyboard? Maybe everyone has their own persistence. We are all newcomers, and we all have the shortcomings that newcomers have. Our stories may not be rigorous, and our coding speed may be very slow, because we feel that our hands can never perfectly display the pictures in our minds. We struggle and think. But please remember that we have not wasted time. Our brains are becoming more and more active, our hands are becoming more and more dexterous and malleable. This is our most valuable asset as newcomers. As newcomers, we may do the same thing every day. We pay attention to our clicks, and every increase will make us feel gratified. When we read book reviews, we all have a skill. Among the advertisements on the screen, we can find the real comment at a glance, whether it is just encouragement or a pertinent criticism. But whether they are encouragement or criticism, we should thank them. It is they who make us feel our own value and let us improve our works. It is always difficult for us to find shortcomings and shortcomings when we read our own works, so I usually like to read the works of many newcomers like me, because we are all young and immature. We can always find shortcomings in others and reflect them on ourselves, so that I can constantly improve my own level. In fact, many creative ideas are buried without attention. It's really a pity to see those works that have been discontinued and updated. So, no matter what our original intention is, (there may be very few people like me who start writing books because of pursuing a girl) maybe you are doing it for fame, maybe you are doing it for profit, maybe it is just a hobby, but no matter what, I hope we can stick to it, just to give our story a perfect ending. We created him with our own hands, and he is our child, and we should let him thrive. Let's work together!

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Do you know how many votes I wasted? You can do the math yourself. Six votes a day, six or six every day. However, today you are more humane. I know I was wrong. Knowing mistakes can correct them Great book, Muyi supports you. 🤝🤝🤝🤝

Classics are continued for the length of life! The excitement is earned by the author's hard work! Your persistence, your persistence your efforts, All your things, All yours, Only, Say, come on, the road ahead belongs to you who are prepared, patient and persistent. Silently supporting is what I should do now. 🤝🤝🤝🤝🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

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