The Love Sword of a Cook Determines the Fate of the Country

Sometimes, humor does not need to be deliberately written, but put into details, which makes it more contagious.

The plot in the following chapters is much smoother than the previous chapters. The author is getting better and better as he writes! I believe this novel will achieve good results.

The author's writing style is quite good. This article is sure to be popular. The review is complete.

I still like Jiang Liancheng, Jiang Liancheng is my type~

It's almost 200,000, is it time to put it on the shelves? It feels great and I will continue to pursue it.

Is Brother Xiaobai finally going to fight back? I always thought he was the kind of gentle and cute little shota type, and he was always being pinched by Hua Ying, like a prince waiting for Princess Qiudi to rescue him, hahaha. Are you finally going to show your true colors as a hero?

The visuals are very strong. I thought the title of the book was quite strange, but I couldn't stop reading it.

Following the article until now, I have watched the author grow up step by step, and the characters have also grown up step by step. It was a bit rambling at the beginning, but it became more and more mature later on, and I noticed that the author was very serious about revising the article, and did not hesitate to revise it. Then I browsed through the revised parts from the beginning, and it did not affect the entire plot or even the details. After reading one chapter, I actually didn't know where she had changed it. It was very smooth and natural. Therefore, the author is making progress, because what he deleted is what was originally redundant. I came here after seeing the author's post asking for advice. I thought it was Gu Ying's self-pitying claptrap, but it turned out that the article was quite good. So don't belittle yourself. Although you are a newcomer, you have no reader base, and you are not familiar with it at the beginning, but with your skills and attitude towards articles, you will definitely become a god in time! As for the technical quality of the article, as a pure reader who has never written a book, I don't seem to have much say in it. I can only say that as a reader, I really like it. . It is my first time to write an article so well. It is simply a genius. In this world of online articles that does not pay attention to writing and only focuses on plot, your article moved me. In terms of plot, the foreshadowing and other aspects are quite solid. Is Murong Bai the male protagonist? The first chapter came out, and then disappeared for dozens of chapters. This layout is really bold and fresh. . Although it is now popular for two people to be together, or even have sex first. . Obviously, she is a reserved person, she seems to be a very graceful and artistic young woman. I don't know when it will be put on the shelves. I should update it soon after it is put on the shelves. I don't always like to follow articles, it's too tiring, but this one, I feel very warm. Come on! !

I am very happy to read the introduction. The text is concise, cheerful and very fluent. It is said that the author is a newcomer. It is really a genius for a newcomer to write like this. Although the subject matter is not popular nowadays, it is really a good article, and it is awesome.

I like Qiudi, a domineering pig-killing girl, and a bit like an artistic young woman.

It's unique. I'm tired of watching people fighting at home and farming, and I'm tired of watching time-traveling women who can do anything. The Pig Killer Girl feels very special.

I feel that the description of details needs to be improved a lot. Hope to keep up the good work! We will all love your work! I also wrote a book, but I gave up because I couldn't hold on. Writing a book is really hard and not easy. Besides throwing away tickets, what else can we do? ? ? Brothers, what are you waiting for? Smash it! ! ! I'll smash it! !

It means that I will never be satisfied with your update speed unless you update five times a day, and so will my friends.