My Pawn Shop System

I suggest the author check more. It doesn't matter if the plot is inconsistent, but it cannot be contradictory.

🌹🌹Now it revolves around the pawn shop. If you have any good stories, ideas, or items to pawn, you can write them down and I will choose to write them in.

I've been watching Pawn Shop No. 8 For a long time, and it's very enjoyable. However, there is a problem with the setting of this book. In other words, if the protagonist is looking for someone to go into a pawn shop to pawn something, there is no need to play the role of a magician or something. He can just follow the approach of Gao Han, the second owner of Pawn Shop No. 8, And go directly to the hospital to find those who are dying and let them go in to pawn. Although it is not suitable to find ordinary people, you can also go to those who are rich and unkind and let them pawn things! I think those rich people who are about to die are definitely willing to spend a lot of things to pawn, such as the health of their loved ones, their affection, future grandchildren, etc. These should all be pawned, and the value is very high. Moreover, it is recommended that the protagonist play the dark type, wait for those people to pawn, and then lure them step by step to pawn their souls. The soul should be the most advanced item, and the luck in exchange should be a lot!

In Chapter 79, "I say: your blood will return to normal and will no longer have a corrosive effect." The "drop" in "Jiang" should be "general".

🌹🌹The novel is very interesting, keep up the hard work hehe❤️❤️✊

The system is great. There is no mindless erasure or mindless sympathy. Although there are 1.2 Scenes that are a bit old, it is definitely a good book.

Could it be that the Six Yang Palm comes from the Tianshan Six Yang Palm?

What everyone agrees on simply doesn't exist! Just write your own. Which book has not been put on the shelves? If you cater to the removal of these drugs from the shelves, do you know that you won't go against others? The key to writing a book lies in the basic skills of plot, interaction, and writing.

Come on, the book is very good. Don't take away the outline. There are many books that are written without the outline. The details can be changed, but the main body must be grasped by yourself.

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It's a pawn shop, it's all kinds of point payouts, it's a lottery... It makes me feel a little dizzy. You want to learn from the strengths of others, but the golden finger should not be too complicated.

After all, the main battlefield is still on Earth. I believe readers would rather see Pig's Feet prospering on Earth. Other planes currently only appear to increase Pig's Feet's abilities. There is no need for a lengthy description. Trying to be as concise as possible should be more in line with readers' interests.

Ahem. . Let me say a few words! The initial outlines are all very good, but your ideas follow your own outline. There is no or I have not found that you changed the outline according to the readers' requirements. It is impossible to remove impurities and get the essence, and it is impossible to work behind closed doors. This book can satisfy people's appetite at the beginning, but later on the protagonist is a little self-righteous and does not take anyone in his eyes. Because of the protagonist's mentality when he got the pawnshop, he believed that he would reach a level that no one could match in the future, so he was arrogant and arrogant. I can understand this, but after experiencing the country The curse in Captain An Bureau Youqiang, when there is a gap in strength between Tianjimen and Hell Organization, he should let go of his previous thoughts, but I didn't see the protagonist's actions, especially in Chapter 77 I Am Compassionate. Do you care about the little people? The protagonist treats others according to his own ideas. There are also too many restrictions in the themed pawn shop, such as: the protagonist's worries, limited customers, and too limited time to enter the pawn shop... I think you should know that I won't say it here. The central theme is too complicated, how can we write well if we don't write around this theme? In addition, the author should give the protagonist benefits such as using the pawn shop to improve his strength. It is recommended that the author not rely too much on the outline, but only focus on the center of the outline and listen to the readers' valuable opinions. Only in this way can he write a good work, rather than improvising a TJ's words. If you agree with the above views and choose some readers' opinions to modify, I will give you a suggestion: the modified free chapters are in the folder or review in the group. Anyway, you have not written many VIP chapters, and there are still opportunities for modification. If you want to write a TJ + bad ending...

Name: Realm: Background: Martial skills: Can you have supernatural powers or some kind of martial arts?

😄😄If you see a typo in any chapter, please tell me! I will definitely change it! My oversight! 😚😚

I popped a bubble to prove that I exist. Another night has passed. I can only come here late at night to take a look at the big update. Come on! Upvote, I believe you can create works that are like gods~~ I'm a little tired from staying up late at night, so I won't say more, like it, go and have a rest, good night...

Even if no one reads it in the end, I will continue to write it and scold me in the comment area. If I can be scolded as a eunuch, that would be cool enough. After all, I have already written a book, right? Anyway, I won't read the comments in the future, so I just write two chapters a day and upload them. 😃😃

I don't like to watch things like depriving others of their things. To put it nicely, it's a fair trade, but to put it badly, it means forcing others to trade. For example, the scene where the mother's son died three months later. Basically, it can be said to be forcing others to trade. I really don't like it 😅

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