Fairy Dust

The novel so far is not too long, because the setting really impressed me, so I read it in one sitting. I would like to share my views a little bit. The author's writing style is very good, and I felt it when I read the first picture. The language can be called "fine". Whether it is the description of the environment or the description of details, they all have unique characteristics. The novel does not stop at the gorgeous words. It can be seen that the author tried his best to make the novel humorous to meet the public's taste. The appearance of characters such as Xiaobao and Yan Jiu adds a bit of interest to the novel. The complaints that appear from time to time also make people laugh while watching. However, the suggestion I want to make is not in terms of writing, but in terms of plot. The first 30,000 words of the novel are very critical, which determine whether the reader will be interested in the novel and continue reading. The first two chapters, I have to say, were not very interesting to write. At least I couldn't have a sense of immersion when reading them. I always felt drifting. The first person used in the original novel should logically be easier for readers to resonate with, but due to too much emphasis on writing, the plot is relatively scattered. Perhaps the author could pay more attention to this point. Another point is that the novel jumps too much, and the transitions between different scenes do not seem to be smooth. Sometimes, people feel confused when reading it. It was clearly written about Su Daji at first, but why did it suddenly jump to Yan Jiu? Or you can consider adding a little transition or the like, so that it reads more smoothly. Finally, it's not an important thing, but I may be a little paranoid. Regarding the ellipsis, just shift and add 6 to type it. Try not to use a period instead. Dear author, keep up the good work!

The novel seems to be mainly supported by dialogue. How about adding a little embellishment, such as the psychological actions of the characters? I feel like the number of words in each chapter is a bit short, so I look forward to the update!

A good book that people can read

There are some pretty women who feel more refreshed when they kill them. Especially the kind of woman with a twitchy head and an unrefined appearance.

Praise! I will continue to follow, there is nothing to say about the recommendation vote.

Haha, the writing in this book is very suitable for my taste. I will read it every day! ~

A good novel, twists and turns and evocative. The writing is well controlled. It would be better to strengthen the psychological description of the characters. There are some imperfections in the writing style, but the plot is attractive and the characters have their own characteristics. It can be seen from this that the author has carefully laid out the direction of the book before writing. It is a masterpiece that enriches the soul. It is worth reading, tasting, and thinking deeply. It is indeed good. I appreciate and look forward to it!!!!! Brother, I support you!

Things must be reversed at their extremes, and novels also have their extremes. The author must not forget the final character of each character~