City's Super Entertainment King

The truth is wrong and the chapter is still missing.

After reading the first chapter and looking at the table of contents, I just want to ask, are you writing about urban entertainment or urban cultivation? Then when I got to chapter 30, I started to charge. Some people thought it was weird, and the comment section was full of nice things to say, which is okay.

It's this kind of rubbish all-around article again, it makes me want to vomit.

This missing chapter is a bit serious

Yang Tong was once a scumbag, but an accident gave him a genius brain. From then on, he ranked first in all exams, all the talented students were beaten, and all the principals and teachers knelt down and licked him. The blood of the academic master hidden in my body, I order you to lift the seal in the name of the academic scumbag!

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I won't say a single thing about it, there are a lot of bugs, and the plot is not good, so I wonder why there are so many things about it? ? Are negative reviews not posted?

Many of them are written directly in a long paragraph without commas, which makes you feel out of breath. I hope the author can improve it. . . . . . Also, this is really not a troll, just a normal suggestion.

Great book! Collected! Come on update!

Come on, author! 🌹🌹🤝Keep up the good work and move forward bravely

A group of ghost kings 240,264,709😃

Come on, author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 🌹🌹🌹

The author has too many ideas. He just comes back after rebirth. One moment he collects demons, and the other he collects ghosts. He plays a game. It's like a virtual online game. He wrote about 20 chapters. For those who don't know, I thought he was writing an online game.

After reading more than 100 times, I gave up decisively. There were pitfalls everywhere.

I can't do it anymore. This book poisoned me to death. If I had known I would have lost my blood, I wouldn't have bought the subscription. It poisoned me to death.

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Changed your name? At the starting point, I originally read a book called "The Ghost King of Entertainment" that I read a long time ago.

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Good book? Top one? Add support?

🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭... Entertainment and training... The creativity is great...🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Great book! Collected! Come on update!

Good writing means that the key points are different and interesting! 🤭

I feel that the background time is a bit messy. The uncle with pig's feet was a prostitute who went to Taiwan in 20 years and returned to the mainland to visit relatives. Apple smartphones have appeared. When did the pig's feet give birth to him? The game appeared at the age of Han Bing (Han Han). . . . . The novel is very good. I hope the author can position the time carefully and be more rigorous.

The content of the writing is good, but the time perspective is a mess. According to the time when The Voice started and the age of the protagonist, it can be said that the protagonist is theoretically born in the 90s. If you are born in the 80s, he would be about the same age as Han Han, but he was born in 1982, but the age before rebirth of a person born in 1982 is 30 years old. Also, the reason why Ye Xiaoyao recognized the protagonist in the beginning was too far-fetched. I don't know if it's because the technology is advanced or because it's a forced arrangement for the plot.

Writing a book is very hard, so since you have written it, you should try your best. At least it should have something of your own, and some things should not be too obvious. Come on! I would like to give you some suggestions and I can make some changes if possible. I apologize if I am wrong! 1. The plot is incoherent and has no main line! 2. The golden finger is not rigorous. 3. The dialogue is procrastinating and a running account! 4. The characterization is pale and the pig's feet have no personality! 5. The story is mechanically copied and full of loopholes!