Qingcheng Loli Is Very Sinister

Ahem, I write this book review with the greatest good intentions. It is definitely not a complaint. The author deeply forgives me. The harem problem in novels is really becoming more and more serious, so I think it is necessary to discuss the issues of world view, outlook on life, and values. [Hey, Dirt! Be serious! [Hold the forehead] Return to the theme. Although I am also the type to drool when it comes to beautiful men, is it really okay to be like Mengmeng, who eats tofu and drools every time I see one? It's not like I haven't read novels written by NP, but well-written novels of this type will not give people a sense of immediate Mary Sue. Every time the heroine falls in love with someone, she is extremely serious, and the process of being together should be bumpy and full of hardships. The hardship I am referring to here means that it takes a certain process for the hero and heroine to have a good impression of each other, or to be together in life and death, or to know each other well, instead of inexplicably falling in love after seeing each other for the first time. Although love at first sight can happen, the probability is not high, right? If you suddenly feel jealous or care about someone, it really goes against scientific principles. What the author actually has to do is to find a reasonable and more touching reason for the heroine to step on several boats. It might be better to write about the heroine's inner struggle or something like that. Although the heroine has traveled from modern times, and although the heroine is a nymphomaniac, these cannot be the reasons for NP. Because of deep love, everyone has memories that cannot be let go, so falling in love with them and having several people in my heart is more convincing, isn't it? Again, these are really not complaints, just some emotions after reading the novel.

A good novel does not need to have a huge background or cool scenes. Even the plot can be warm or funny, and it does not have to be too twists and turns. However, character creation is very important. The novel has been written so far, and it is quite long. There are not too many characters, but I think it's a bit weird. After thinking about it for a long time, I finally realized it. Author, don't you think there are really few female characters in it? Well... The portrayal of the heroine is quite brilliant, and it is easy to see how scheming and vicious the empress is, but the two female characters may not be able to sustain the novel. Although it can be explained that because this is a [harem-oriented] novel, the male characters are more important, but I always feel that if I read too many beautiful men, I will suffer from aesthetic fatigue. As the heroine continues to become stronger, can she consider having one or two best friends? There is no doubt that love moves people, but sometimes friendship can also move people, right? I always feel that the author has not shown the tender side of the same-sex relationship except for showing us all the viciousness of the Queen~ I am not writing this review to criticize the author or anything, I am just expressing my personal views on this novel. In fact, the author also noticed that there are relatively few supporting female characters in the novel, right? It's just that the author has not taken any measures in this regard. Sometimes being cute can't solve some flaws in novel writing. Shouldn't the author face these problems head-on? My personal suggestion is that I hope the author won't be angry after reading it.

Forgive me... There are too many typos in the novel. Did the author really not consider checking it before publishing?

After entering this different world, Mengmeng has actually been growing up, and is no longer the otaku living under the protection of her brother~~

When I first started, after reading the first dozen chapters, I really felt that this was just a simple romance novel. It was nothing more than a story about how the heroine hooked up with all kinds of beautiful men, and finally led to a happy and noble life. But unexpectedly, the author was not willing to stop the plot at this part. Therefore, in the second volume, we saw the plot of cultivation. It's like a sudden change in style. However, it is precisely because of the increase in cultivation plots that the novel no longer seems so monotonous. In this regard, I still have to give the author a big 32 thumbs up! The plot of the novel should be what readers pay most attention to when reading a novel. If the first 30,000 words cannot attract readers, then they will often give up on the novel. No matter how exciting the later chapters are, they may have missed it. Therefore, within 30,000 words, there must be highlights that attract readers. This novel uses a time-travel plot, and to be honest, it's really a mess. The encounter with Ritsukawa Kao at the beginning seems to have been seen in many romance novels. It is indeed enjoyable to look at different types of beauties, but sliminess, sliminess, and all kinds of nausea are not the key factors to retain readers after all. If you think about it from this aspect, I think the author should have moved the plot of cultivation further forward. After all, the sooner your uniqueness is discovered, the better, right? There are quite a lot of twists and turns in the novel, but from my personal feeling, it seems that it could be more compact and maximize the efficiency of the text, which might be better. However, as far as the plot is concerned, this novel is still very good. I will give it a try once it is released!

When that person is just a dream living in his heart, he will naturally be beautified a lot, so it is right to say that distance produces beauty! For example, Ritsukawa Xiang.

Every time I see "It's all up to you", I get goosebumps~ Don't you think it's disgusting? Maybe it's because my lightning points are relatively low.

Well, once you pay more attention to someone, you actually have a feeling of liking it, right? But if you like Mengmeng, you may have many love rivals.

It's really embarrassing to be so sentimental! Ah ha ha ha ha... Do you think Mo Chen wants to do something to her?

I feel that the heroine often has a strong sense of justice, and often does things like drawing a sword to help when there is injustice, but this can be regarded as showing her kind side.

If you are not greedy, then live a good life with Aru. Seeing other beautiful men with nosebleeds and acting like nymphos is actually greedy, right?

Be decisive, coquettishness is a woman's sharpest weapon! Look, as long as Mengmeng acts coquettishly, Ritsukawa-ka immediately softens her heart.

He usually seems to be super honest, but when he meets someone he likes, he will be shy and blush. There should be many people like Aru.

Is there really no problem with Mai Mengmeng doing this? I'd better do less of this kind of frivolous and beautiful men everywhere... I always feel that the harem will be too large.

Although she is not as prosperous as other time-traveling heroines by telling quotes from famous people, I think Mai Mengmeng has already developed a golden finger.

By the way, did Mengmeng sell Lü Chuanxiang like this? Does Ritsukawa know she is like this? It's so deceptive, isn't it?

You can only get out of psychological shadows by yourself, and other people's blind comfort may not be of much use.

Did Mai Mengmeng like YY before time travel? After time travel, all kinds of beautiful men just satisfied her sexual desire. Forgive me for the twitching of the corner of my mouth.

There must be a furry animal in a novel to show off its cuteness, like Zhizhi, so humane and cute, so cute and adorable!

She said that she quite likes Yu Qingfei, but he has too few scenes! The author reveals a little bit, will he appear in the harem?

People who have experienced battles in the palace are indeed more scheming. The Queen's level of viciousness is much higher than that of Mai Mengmeng.

No matter who Mengmeng chooses to be with, she is bound to let everyone else down, so the best ending is probably the harem, right? Ha ha……