Spirituality Mongolian Plateau

So far, after reading Chapter 28, I can see that the author uses Shandan's growth as the main line and uses traditional writing methods to delicately describe a story about grassland customs and people. What is worthy of praise is that the detailed description is very good, and it has a style of "Ordinary World". The disadvantage is that many stories can be very touching, but the author treats them very blandly. I don't know whether it is intentional or there are other considerations: For example, in the story of Black Tiger, when Shandan welcomed it, he described the mood of joy with great grandeur. However, when Black Tiger died as a tragic character, the author just brushed off Shandan's sad mood... It felt a bit anticlimactic. There is also a scene where the lactating fox was beaten to death after stealing a chicken, and everyone expressed emotion. I think people living on the grassland will respect life, but here it is explained in one sentence... These two scenes make me feel that I still have more to say. Are they to focus on the point? However, after reading so many chapters, the author does not hesitate to describe everything Shandan has experienced. Why is there no feeling in these two incidents? This makes me feel that Shandan's image is not very full.

Well written, I admire your creative ability and vote for it ✊

"Spiritual Mongolian Plateau" is recommended as a real-life high-quality book. Please read it and give it your full support! Thanks! Chapters are all complete and not blocked.

However, I have to say that among these online articles, the author's work is the best. Although it has some flaws, I still like it very much.

I didn't expect to see the author's personal reply! Flattered! Again, no book can be perfect. However, this does not stop me from loving this book. Reading your book makes me feel like I have returned to my school days. The simple words with profound thoughts come into my eyes. I basically read them word by word, and I enjoy it very much. Thank you for such great work! Hope there will be more new works!

I hope the author will publish a new book as soon as possible

How should I put it, I've been watching it for a long time and I haven't seen anything very interesting yet. Collect it first and look at it later when you have nothing to do.

I have collected it for several years but have not opened it yet. I read it today and felt relieved.

Good mood! Please collect it! "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

Good mood! Please collect it! "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

Good mood! Please collect it! "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

Awesome, finally done.

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I went out yesterday and came back today to continue occupying the high ground. This territory is mine! ~

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Wait. "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

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I wish the masterpiece can be reopened! [Fn=2_9]

The sibling relationship between Shandan and Mao Daner is subtle and delicate. Especially the part about catching quails is so vividly written that it seems to have found the shadow of my own naughty childhood! 🤭Full sense of involvement! 🌹

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Thank you all for your continued support! 😄

I write with my heart and emotions, and I hope the author can overcome this hurdle and welcome a new life with rewards and support.

Wait. "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

Wait. "The Legend of Diaoyutai" and "The First Naval Battle in History"

I flipped through it briefly at first, and almost every place I turned to was very attractive. The language and emotions were like a bubbling clear spring, and the complicated life was narrated. I could feel the author's calm and delicate mind between the lines. I didn't know if my feeling was right. I collected it and wrapped myself in a quilt to savor it on a cold day. Thank you, author, for your summary of life!

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Gu Haiping sells medicine, a classmate induces labor, and Erhua is pregnant. The author wants to express many things, but I think how to organize the materials is a problem. The Spiritual Mongolian Plateau is not a story, it is a person's life, a history of the grassland. If you want to tell this history or life well, you still need to sort out and design the story and let the story become a container, rather than telling one paragraph after another and then continuing. This way it is flat and has no tension. This is my opinion now.