The Story of the Storm

Long review of "The Legend of the Immortal" 1 No matter which one of Bao Bao's novels, the plot progresses very quickly, but this plot refers to the stories coming one after another. I admire Bao Bao's imagination. , Can be regarded as a very ordinary beginning. It describes the identity of the heroine in time travel, and also points out the identity of the heroine as a good-for-nothing. It lays the foundation for the heroine's rapid progress in the future. People can't help but guess what things will happen to the heroine later that will change her identity as a good-for-nothing. There is also the heroine's excellent master. When I saw the heroine talking to her master, it felt like two lolita were bargaining. This master is a bit of a genius. It was written about the heroine's superb cooking skills, and the chef's skillful hands, and the beauty of the heroine she made, but there were no specific incidents to illustrate these two things, so it seemed a bit unreal. The plot of each book in Bao Bao goes by very quickly, but the occurrence of each event feels so short-lived. In fact, I could have written more on a specific event, the number of words has been rounded up, and the plot has been enriched. The heroine was bullied like this in the Crane Sect, why didn't she ever think about leaving? I really want to know. When I saw the heroine's master saying: "You pretend, keep pretending for me!", I unconsciously pictured the bag in my mind, with my hands on my hips, yelling at the heroine in a vicious voice. There are also several foreshadowings, so that the plot of the second chapter has almost surfaced, and it still makes people want to see what the heroine will encounter when she goes to collect silk from the sky. However, it's a little unclear what "luck" means in the first chapter. This first long review is a bit messy.

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