Super Wuxia Dungeon System

Toxic, Goodbye At first, I wrote that the protagonist was cautious and had a very good attitude. After opening a dungeon, he started racing wildly and was so arrogant. Then after drinking, a boss appeared, and he automatically covered up the protagonist's flaws. There was something wrong with the setting.

This book makes me fall asleep! Not interesting

Kindness is not something you do for anyone to see, it is a feeling, which makes you happy, happy and satisfied. I hate those who call kindness the Holy Mother. The author is a sentimental person and the book describes emotions very richly. That's fine but don't do it too often and look like you're being flirty. 🤭🤭

The heroine is a waste. She knows that she will come back strong in the later period, but she is still a waste. The important thing about a person is self-knowledge. Without self-awareness, she will always be just a burden. There is also no obvious difference between the two worlds. Since it is the way of self and the way of nature, but the way of nature in the main world has never been shown, the feeling is still In martial arts, there is no such thing as flying into the sky and escaping from the earth, spreading beans to make soldiers, and the game world has no characteristics. It blurs monsters, upgrades, and drops after death. There is no obvious boundary between the two worlds, and no difference can be seen. Looking at it, you have to consider which world you are in now. Since there is no obvious difference between the worlds, why bother writing about the two worlds. By the way, the author seems to have forgotten an interesting detail, which is the sub-profession. The article describes that every time you advance to a higher level, you can unlock a sub-profession. In fact, you only get the medical skill for the first promotion, and then it is gone. I would like to make a small suggestion. The main world should be written about the way of nature. Cultivation and understanding of the nature of heaven and earth are the main line. You can talk about being born in the world. Through the sub-professions blessed by the system, you can experience the various aspects of life in the game world. The plot is light. The game world is also mainly about martial arts. Be brave and diligent. Maybe you can provide some life-saving plug-ins. You don't need to always linger on the edge of life and death. Once or twice is fine. Writing too much will be boring. In the end, it will be boring. It would be nice to give the system more roles in the end. Since the destruction of the three major families in Haicheng, the system has not appeared for a long time. The title of the book is System Flow. We can't sell dog meat on the sheep's head. As a man with cheats, there are all kinds of magic weapons, martial arts, secrets, elixirs and elixirs. You just need to balance the difficulty of obtaining them in reality with the difficulty of obtaining them in the system. I talk a lot because I like it, sorry! I hope the author's next novel will be better and better

I lost my mood after reading the introduction. I was reading a book to relax, but as soon as I came here, I talked about a conspiracy.

The protagonist is very brainless, and the author's thinking is probably chaotic. I have read several books, and the settings of the protagonist are all a mess. There is a villain mentality, and there is also a desire for revenge, but it is all mixed up. Are you trying to make a fool of yourself? Cleaning up is also very difficult. It is estimated that the author's writing skills are insufficient, the setting is confusing, and the outline is confusing. I have ideas, but I can't write. I'm probably below the second-tier level...