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New fantasy book "Super Destruction" [url=imi6v2] I'm here to cause havoc! Murong Yunfei, who had experienced nine lives, traveled to the fantasy space in his tenth life. He never imagined that everything was not as beautiful as promised by the Space-Time Management Bureau. He was so angry that he decided to give up the mission and began a journey of destruction. Already signed! I hope everyone will support it, collect it and recommend it!

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The plot is messy, the writing is not fluent, and the twists are too abrupt. Overall, it's a book that I don't want to read.

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1. The article is relatively bland and has nothing outstanding, which shows that the author's writing skills are really average. 2. There are too many typos, wrong idioms and phrases. The author definitely didn't review it after writing, which shows that he didn't bother to write the book. 3. No effort was made to portray the main characters. For example, the male protagonist is an old monster in the world of cultivation and is the leader. His behavior style is similar to that of a college student, and his thinking is not calm and mature enough. It failed. The author can refer to the figures in the country's leadership to see how they feel when they appear on camera every day, and how they speak and act. 4. Not to mention the old-fashioned subject matter. As long as you have enough skill, you may not be able to write good things with old-fashioned themes. It's just that the novels are clichéd and the routines come and go. When you meet someone, the male protagonist will definitely look for trouble, and then pretend to be a slap in the face for a series of packages, or he will be robbed and killed. Readers don't feel tired watching it, and you are tired of writing it, right? Bookworm's summary score: 45. There is still a long way to go before passing the exam. Keep honing your writing skills and think about what stories to write. Otherwise, you won't be able to write a good story even if you have a good subject matter.

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"The Fairy Farmer" is released, asking for support!

It looks really weird. There are a lot of mistakes. Not to mention other logic and typos, the names of 167 pig feet are all wrong. What about Chapter 169? It's gone (it's not cut and dried) 😵😵😵😵😵😵