I Am a Virtuous Concubine

The writing is average. After reading it for a long time, I still can't understand the entanglement between the male and female protagonists before they get married. The background is not explained, and the current relationship network of the surrounding aristocratic families in the capital is not explained. It starts all kinds of conflicting stories directly. The key point is that almost everyone in the story is very vague, and the personality and behavior of the male and female protagonists are very vague. , There are no impressive characters in the entire article, the level of house fighting is very low, and sometimes people who read it are confused. The dialogues are supposed to reflect a character's personality, but unfortunately most of the dialogues are similar, and sometimes even a little childish and ridiculous. The name of the heroine and the maid actually have the same word "purple", which is a big taboo. There is a lack of literary common sense, the overall description of the story logic is not good, and the segmentation needs to be improved. The best I can give this article is three stars.

Well, what's more annoying than poor writing style is the brainless and cool writing style. The heroine traveled through time and found that she was killed by her husband's family. She didn't have any sense of crisis. She didn't hide her clumsiness or use any scheming. She just behaved like a shrew and was so arrogant. Why? She had no strength, no connections, and no backing. Could it be that her husband's family was cowardly? If the husband's family is so cowardly, how could the original owner be assassinated?