Talent Totem

Why does the author always use "strong" to describe others, such as "strong old man" and "strong figure"...

Pure white text. No wonder I can't stand it anymore. He's old!

I still remember this book. The protagonist makes cigarettes in it. I read it in junior high school. I was already a sophomore in college. Time is gone and I can't get it back.

I feel that the protagonist's IQ is a bit low, and I have more and more doubts from the beginning. Is his ability to accept time travel from this world so poor?

I don't know why I can't stand it.

I feel that many of the descriptions in it are very strange. I want to read on but can't stand it because of the text... And I am indecisive about Yun Ranling. Don't you want to stop other people's little girls earlier? You have been waiting for you for so many years, and you are still drunk... And you often feel so moved when you have sex, and your eyes are red. What is the description?

I think the author wants to describe the protagonist as someone who should be particularly grateful for kindness and love and justice, but it doesn't have to be so weird, right? "My heart trembles every time, and an inexplicable emotion quietly emerges." Don't you think this is weird? Is the emotional atmosphere exaggerated too much? And doesn't this sentence sound awkward?

I didn't want to read the third chapter

Immortals are also addicted to smoking... They boldly assume that there are no boundaries and no edges, and they also give discounts to their own people to encourage smoking. The feeling of smoking is floating, just like taking drugs... I can't imagine the author's train of thought... 🤐

This pig's trotters are really not as good as ordinary people, and they are always going back to their previous lives. Their IQ is worrying, and I really can't hold on.

It's the boss, I've gone to drink some garbage! Brainless

You hurt me, I cut you with a knife

Lend me 300 collections, dare to call Xiaoao Qidian Jianghu, congratulations on reaching 300 collections!

In the relaxing adventure fantasy "Hunxiao Tianya", several brothers accidentally got involved in a conspiracy. How can a person wander around in this world without getting stabbed? Smile away all grudges, smile again and you will be far away! I have been fattened and please support me. Please forgive me for occupying valuable land 🙂

It's rebirth, not time travel It's like being unable to react. The servants are all used to it, but the elders still don't get used to it? ? What the hell

The meaning of the heart (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

Although the story is good, the text seems a bit awkward...

Do you think you treat dogs as friends? Is this tone different from that of a pet dog🈶️?

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