Concubine

The writing is smooth and the dialogue has an ancient charm. It is a bit strange that "a worry-free future" is the first pot of gold. This can easily lead to a loss of funds. Later, shipping can be said to be a real fortune. Later, the heroine became too entangled in things like bad guys and good guys buying and selling maids, fairness and justice. Sometimes he seems very irrelevant and obsessed with money, and sometimes he can be so stupid that he almost goes crazy. The reason why many literati commit suicide due to depression is because they think too much! To be honest, this heroine doesn't like this kind of character and some ways of doing things. I was still angry and sentimental when I was looking for my biological mother. I don't understand why. After all, the heroine is not her original self. She is an outsider who has traveled through time. Many female protagonists in novels are like this, which looks weird.

I really don't know why I want to give the heroine a time-travel identity. I don't even have a golden finger, so I'm just submissive.

Since the male protagonist appeared, the writing style has changed

It took me eight hours to read it, and it was indeed wonderful. I really like Jin Tongren and Wang Xiangcui, but the ending does not fully explain their endings. After the Zhu family fell, did the Jin family become the richest man in Hangzhou or something else happened... The unknown ending is a bit regretful. As for Zhu Ziyu and Jiang Shuyun, these two characters were created extremely well, so their deaths made people feel very sad and very uncomfortable when watching them. As for the image creation of the heroine, it should be said that it is extremely perfect. The supporting characters are also written very vividly. In short, it is a very good work🌹

It's pretty good-looking. It's not eloquent, but sometimes the words don't convey what I mean.

The front part is very good, but after returning from Japan, it started to become crooked and not as refined as before.