Tokyo: Their Conditions Are Worse Than Mine
东京：她们的病情比我严重
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 111k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 13h ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
51Chapters
134Votes
23Recs
0Fans
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Reader comments 5
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It seems like I should write a Qiu Zhui to read it.
Yesterday I saw the reading data. Although it was a bit of a surprise, I still had to write it down, right? As we all know, it is very important to follow up on new book issues. If you are lucky enough to like this book, please stay on the latest chapter for more than ten seconds every day and then turn to the end. This is also considered a follow up reading. Thank you very much! (The scene is over, the following are some thoughts It seems that because the number of words is too small, many people only collect it and don't pursue it. After the reading data came out for the second day today, I adjusted it myself. Okay This is a good thing Only collecting and not reading, at least it shows that I am pretty good in the first few chapters Even if I write later, the collection that grows every day can be regarded as positive feedback I should cry when they find out that the later writing is not to their liking and delete the book directly, right? Finally, I promise that no matter how bad the data in this book is, I will insist on finishing it and writing it to the end, and will not escape from the outline.
There is a faint sense of death, and the role of Golden Finger is not very prominent. The transition is abrupt after the first heroine appears (maybe it's because I didn't see it), and then there's nothing about the eldest lady's family at all (maybe it's because I didn't see it). The plot is not bad, the feeling of death is too heavy, there is a lack of psychological description, and most of them are dry dialogues. But the most important thing is that I feel that the function of the golden finger is not too prominent. It should have more than these functions.
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Too watery? No main plot? The plot is boring? The character design collapsed? Please feel free to speak your mind as long as you are not attacking. (Zuozhu's author account cannot post book reviews. I think it's better to click in and write one using my reader account.
Memory mark, hope to see you in Sanjiang
Memory mark, hope to see you in Sanjiang