
Douluo Dalu: Huo Yuhao's Big Brother, with Wu Siduo's Template!
斗罗:霍雨浩大哥,舞丝朵模板!
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I feel like there's something wrong with the logic in the introduction.
In the novel, in order for Huo Yuhao to change his surname, Dai Mubai even mentioned that he could not be with Tang Wutong. Huo Yuhao turned away when faced with the threat that he would not be able to be with Tang Wutong if he did not change his surname, and that he might be killed by Tang San. This shows that in Huo Yuhao's heart, his mother is more important than his lover and his own life. Original text: Dai Mubai's eyes were cold, "You don't even recognize your ancestors?" Huo Yuhao's expression had also turned cold, and in this short period of time, he had made up his mind. Some things can be changed, but some things can never be changed. "I have not denied my ancestors. However, my surname can only follow my mother's. My mother has worked hard to raise me since I was a child. As long as there is some delicious food in the house, my mother will give it to me, but she secretly eats things that are not what people should eat. Without my mother, I would have died long ago, so how can I talk about recognizing my ancestors? I have been able to stop resenting it, but when I gained the ability, my mother was no longer there. "The only thing I can do for my mother is to pass on her surname. Therefore, my surname is Huo, and this surname will never change, unless my mother comes back to life and asks me to change it herself!" At the beginning, it was a little difficult for Huo Yuhao to say these words, but the more he said it, the stronger his momentum became. By the end, he stood up from the ground and spoke firmly against the huge pressure brought by Dai Mubai. Dai Mubai said coldly: "I already know everything about you. You have offended Tang San. Without us, Tang San would never have given you a chance and would even strangle you. If your surname is Huo, you can get out. You are not from my Dai family. Man, I won't help you a single cent. In this world of gods, you will not be able to move even a single step, and you will even be judged by Tang San." Huo Yuhao's heart felt cold. He smiled mockingly, took two steps back, and bowed to Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing respectfully. Just when Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing thought he was going to change his mind, he had already straightened his back, turned around and walked out of the yard. He walked without hesitation, without any hesitation. He would rather be an enemy of the world than change his filial piety towards his mother. "Yu Hao!" At this moment, suddenly, a call suddenly sounded from behind. This voice was full of choking and eagerness, as well as endless love and compassion. Hearing this voice, Huo Yuhao's whole body suddenly trembled. His eyes were filled with horror. He stood there motionless as if he had been hit by a immobilization spell. He turned around blankly and slowly. But his so firm back was constantly trembling at this moment, trembling violently. The reason why he later changed his surname was because his mother was resurrected by Tang San and the others (strictly speaking, it was her mother who was in their hands). However, according to the introduction of the article, the protagonist finally became the God King, and Huo Yun'er should have no chance of falling. In the hands of Tang Fozu and the others (I really can't imagine how useless the protagonist must be under such a heaven-defying mechanism to let his mother fall into their hands) How could Huo Yuhao change his surname when Huo Yun'er was not in their hands? After all, not even Tang Wutong could make him change his surname🧐
Personally, I feel that this book is likely to be unfinished. From the current point of view, the protagonist has a lofty ideal but cannot see himself clearly. He looks down on the inheritance of the second-level gods and looks down on Lord Tang Buddha. These are fine, but the problem is that he does not have the trump card to do so. There is no system (it is just a template with no other functions) and there is no grandfather (it must be a god-king-level grandfather). How can you resist? Just rely on the so-called Dou San talent to be the best? It's purely funny. If your talent is really good in Dou San, it's not necessarily true in Dou Two. The development and utilization of various resources and cultivation methods in this era are definitely not as good as Dou San. Apart from other things, it's not certain whether the protagonist can reach the limit without Tang Buddha's attention. Don't think that you can break through casually if you are talented. In the original work, Huo Yuhao's breakthrough is so fast purely because of the resource pile, but where can the protagonist get resources without other golden fingers? Not to mention the ridiculous Duke's Palace, Dai Hao used the resources of the entire Duke's Palace to break through the title in the later period. In the later period, the Sun and Moon Empire directly started a war to destroy the country. Without the Tang Buddha Lord Mechanical God descending to Xingluo, it would be gone. By then, the protagonist will definitely be liquidated. Even if he hides and waits until he has achieved success, what will happen? The protagonist of the Tang Buddha shielding the God Realm will definitely not be able to get the inheritance of other gods. The continent is unified and the lifespan of Titled Douluo is far less than that of Dou Yi. Believing to become a god will not make it possible. In the end, he will have to be trapped in the mortal world. Normally speaking, the Dou Er timeline without powerful plug-ins would be a hell dungeon. It would be difficult for civilians to awaken martial arts and have no resources to practice. The nobles and royal families are waiting for liquidation after the unification war. Over the Sun and Moon, the imperial power struggle is wreaked by evil soul masters. As for Shrek, the god-man concentration camp, just pray not to be sacrificed to heaven by the Supreme Elder.
Here is the content before the author revised it
The protagonist of this novel is Huo Yun'er's son. At the beginning, he watched his own mother, who had been dependent on him for six years, being beaten to death, and then looked indifferent. Huo Yuhao later said that the protagonist was one of the murderers who killed Huo Yun'er. There is really nothing wrong with this statement. After all, without God's perspective, who would know Tang San? As long as the protagonist frowned when his own mother was beaten again after he awakened his martial soul and was taken seriously, Huo Yun'er would not be so miserable. Later, the protagonist also said how much the people in the Duke's Palace respected him. He was the princess's fiancé and the future heir of the Duke's Palace... Come on, they beat your own mother to death, and others ignored it even if they didn't know that there was a god. Is this called respect? Respect your ass, to put it bluntly, it depends on the owner when beating a dog. In the last chapter, the protagonist said how much he was valued, and the Duchess asked her son to help him. In the next chapter, his own mother was beaten to death. Others did not treat her for the sake of the protagonist, and the person who beat her did not treat her lightly because of the protagonist. They didn't say anything about his mother being beaten to death (this group of people obviously didn't take the protagonist seriously, otherwise even if the protagonist didn't like it, no one would dare to humiliate his mother, let alone beat her to death) Besides turtle, I really can't think of any other adjective for this kind of thing. Furthermore, Tang Fozu also valued him because of this, and felt that the protagonist used his own mother as a proxy. This is even more nonsense (here, he really supports Tang Fozu's murder of the protagonist). Tang Fozu is a staunch supporter of ancient people + feudal ethics. In ancient times, a young master of a family sat back and watched others beat his own mother to death, and he still looked indifferent. In ancient times, he would be punished and his body would be spat on. It was recorded in the history books that Chen Shimei was beheaded even if his parents let them starve to death (the reason why Chen Shimei was finally sentenced was not that he ignored his wife or hired someone to kill someone, but because he was unfilial). The behavior of the protagonist Ling Chi is really not excessive (let alone Chen Shimei is a fictional character, this fictional character was created by the people of the Ming Dynasty, and the fact that it has been passed down to this day proves that even ancient people believed this behavior He deserves to die, he deserves to be a relative of the emperor, the princess and the queen mother cannot be saved, even the top of the monarchy like the Qing Dynasty thinks he is unfilial, damn it) It can be said that giving birth to him is worse than having a barbecued pork in every sense. As mentioned at the beginning, the three of them are not taken seriously, and they are often abused. Then Huo Yun'er, a woman who was often abused, took the two of them by herself without anyone's help. A child who had no ability to take care of himself before the age of three has grown up. There is no credit but hard work. (Even if the protagonist is a time traveler, he is still a baby without the ability to take care of himself before he is one or two years old, and Huo Yun'er has to take care of two babies.) If you don't like Huo Yun'er, don't drink her milk and eat the food she cooks. It's so easy to escape from her. When she was born, she held you in her arms. Just don't open your mouth to suck the milk. The setting that Huo Yun'er is Tang San's ghost in the back was also added after modification. It is obviously used to wash out the protagonist ps: Readers have different standards for spoof articles and high-quality articles. Since the author made this novel available on the shelves in Chapter 20, don't blame the readers for reading this novel with the requirement of high-quality articles.
The summary of the plot based on the synopsis: Either the writer is Yun Gou who has never watched Peerless Tang Sect, or the protagonist is a new three, Chen Gong, who has never experienced anything like this, and Chen Cao, who is sad for the lord and congratulates the lord at the same time.
I came here because of the reputation, I hope the author can be beaten to death without frowning.
The last few pictures made me feel a little sick, and I was accused of killing my mother 🙂
This author just wants to make quick money and dares to put on the shelves after only 20 chapters. It's best not to subscribe to eunuch prevention.
First of all, the god status can be improved. If you have no relationship with Tang San in Dou Er Tang Family Continent, you won't be able to become a god. The poisonous three hundred thousand year soul rings don't even have second level gods, but they are still dismissive. God of War is the main god in other novels. He can definitely come and get stronger as he fights, launches wars, and so on, which will increase his strength. It feels a bit stupid for the protagonist to be dismissive. It's not good to have a second-level divine protector, and it can improve the divine status. Moreover, he doesn't care about his second-generation relatives, and it feels illogical to be contrary to Tang San. 🙂
Are the protagonists and authors of this book not as knowledgeable as Tang San and San Shao?
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Now it is still the case that it was modified after being scolded. The plot before the change was really about seeing Huo Yun'er and Huo Yuhao being beaten, and then gloating that he was okay. Because the system gave him a Wusiduo template, and he was very talented, he immediately drew a line and thought that Huo Yuhao was a pure waste at the first level of innateness. Now this part has been deleted. In order to make the protagonist's life-killing behavior reasonable, Huo Yun'er added the setting that Tang San was a ghost from the beginning. It was added after he was scolded.