Naruto: Imagination Made Manifest, I Am the Real Thing

I have read the two books of Emperor Sakura and Kakashi, and I am currently planning to read Hinata's book. When I saw that you started a new book, I thought I could remind you earlier, so as not to have to change the outline after writing too much, so I would like to make a suggestion: Don't fix the regretful ending, okay? Eternal Emperor Ying Tian decided to be lonely and dehumanized forever. Kakashi became lonely when he joined the body and the way. Human beings can feel that they are in danger, and light can only be reincarnated, but from a philosophical point of view, is the person who keeps reincarnating still the same person? So promise me not to have any more regretful endings. How to deal with the person who has lived for a long time and has lost his humanity? In fact, it is hard to say, but it is not easy. We can learn from the state of mind in some immortal literature. In one sentence, "cultivate one's life without cultivating one's nature, this is the first disease of spiritual cultivation." Refining the heart, a Taoist heart is eternal. I will always be the same me. Even after a long time, I have only become mature, not much has changed. In essence, I am still the same high-spirited and passionate young man. The problem of lifespan actually only lies in one sentence of the author's setting. I see that neither of your two books has integrated the chakra system to develop a systematic practice state system. Emperor Ying Tian did not even begin to explore outer space three thousand years later. You must know that the chakra cannons and air ninja warships that originally shattered meteorites were developed. After unification, they concentrated their efforts on better development and made technological progress faster. However, three thousand years later, there was no spaceship. The speed of technological development was similar to that of Douluo, who had not made much progress in the past ten thousand years. Not a single six-level class was born, which is outrageous. Author, you can let the protagonist develop a systematic chakra practice system, such as Qi-building foundation pills for cultivating immortals, so that people can better reach the sixth level. You can also let the protagonist bring modern technology that does not require chakra, and combine the two technology trees to not only strengthen personal strength, but also strengthen the overall strength. In this way, the problems of human nature and life span have been solved, and there is no need to worry about Otsutsuki in the future. It is completely possible for the protagonist to retire normally and enjoy the mountains and rivers with such people in the future.

6 I hope the heroine is Xiaoguang

Yes, the world of Naruto has welcomed his fantasy dragon. I think the author is platinum! 🤭

The middle and late stages of the Third World War were Konoha's lawless era. In this period, unless someone with a strong background had the background to not be afraid of being plotted, they would become a speed bump. Either he is being tricked by his old boss or being targeted by Danzo (it is convenient for the author to stage the film about you and me, right); In addition, the fourth generation Hokage of the author's cupid, the protagonist is always opened in the opposite direction by his own people. It doesn't matter if the protagonist wants to hide, and it doesn't matter whether he wants to hide or not. Anyway, he will be discovered by Minato in the end, and then be exposed to conspiracy theories (the cause of the death of the gem sword); The protagonist's ability is too conceptual and the enemy's physical strength is too weak (the third generation and the senior class have relatively "no big standard ability" and can only do small things); In the end, as long as the protagonist has time to grow up, it is basically I can recommend it as the God of Ninja, but because I take into account the original version of Naruto and have to wait for Umon Sasuke to come up with it (forget about Sasuke's inspiration as an ordinary person, Umon's mouth escape will only feel boring now that I know the ending of Boruto); But because the protagonist has grown up and can obviously calm everything down, but I have to take into account the role of the original character. Doing nothing, and coordinating with the plot, you have to impose a counter-attack on the opponent in the later stage (such as the prophecy of the Mystic Mountain God or the fate of the six old thieves brothers, or the direct active pursuit or the neutral monster period), the protagonist is like Senju Hashirama, leaving countless consequences. This is the reason why readers feel that the protagonist is inhuman/anti-human (because the protagonist If you are still alive, then you become a villain); In another period, you can directly enhance the enemy's immediate tension (Uchiha fans love to wear the Eve of Genocide) or directly participate in the four battles (next door, there is Kurama Yakumo who uses his ability to add points from the infinite Tsukuyomi in reverse to directly become an immortal...), Otherwise half a step ahead is a genius, but taking one step further is a madman. ; Also, the second design of "turning things around to save regrets" usually destroys the original design's cost of establishing a world view and shaping the sense of gravity. If the second creation simply erases death without paying the corresponding price, the story will easily lose weight and become bland (if the two Narutos don't turn over, they can just tie the four countries, right?)

This time the protagonist is from the Kurama family, and we have to deal with Yin Dun and Yun Ren at the beginning, which is quite medical.

Author, although what I said may be a bit perverted. But in fact, the starting point is that there are many readers (such as me) who have not read the original work and will also read fan fiction. Your book is a bit unfriendly to people like me who have not read the original work. You have not explained many settings clearly, at least it is difficult for readers who have not read the original work to understand. I have read a few chapters so far and the story is okay. I hope to take care of readers who have not read the original work when I write later.

It's really important to catch up on new book issues! Please don't keep reading. You will die accidentally 😭 Please read the book every day to see how many names are displayed on the last page. Thank you very much!!!

I have some thoughts after reading Hinata's book before. I haven't finished reading the free chapters of that book. I hope it can have some influence on the author's new book. Hinata Uemoto's style has not changed much from the previous Shinobu Sakura game, but there is a gap in rhythm and excitement. In terms of rhythm, Sakura Ninja has a very strong rhythm. She has the Seal of the Hundred Heroes and Ninjutsu Ninjutsu, so Sakura has to keep performing in order to use it openly and honestly, which is very clear. But in Hinata's book, the plot before it was released didn't have that strong character drive, and the sense of anticipation during the reading process wasn't that strong. As for the cool points, Sakura is mentioned as being awesome at the beginning, but this awesomeness has to be realized in the future. Every time Sakura's combat power is realized after that, it meets the readers' expectations. There are many levels of cool points. Hinata's book is not as smooth, and even not undulating enough. The key to a good article is to enjoy it, and the key to reading it is to look forward to it. In the final analysis, it is the characters and plot. The above views are only partial and personal, not comprehensive, nor are they true insights. I hope the author's new book will sell well 🌹🌹🌹🌹