Supreme Furui Starting from Bone King

For these three recent chapters, due to the decline in the number of collectors, the author is looking for his own writing problems. Because the author is a new writer, he also knows that there must be some problems with what he writes, but because he is obsessed with the authorities, he uses each chapter after writing. After writing, al asked the most vicious reviewer to talk about the shortcomings of each chapter. The other party did say that "the description of the environment is not good, there is no sense of painting", "the characters are not three-dimensional enough, the emotions are not enough", "the story is not complete, there is no cause and result". The author feels as if he has figured it out. The last few chapters are just over 3,000 words each, and writing is more brain-burning than before. It turns out that writing about 4,000 words per chapter is not that difficult. The author still plans to follow his own writing style like the first few chapters, so that it will be faster and there will be no need to waste more time.

This kind of setting is very stupid. If you travel back in time and spend a lot of money to lead a group of people as a game anchor, you can still close the server on time and time travel like the original? Normal people should spend little or no money on games and try not to affect the operation of the game. As long as they can travel through time, they are already the king of kings. How do you travel through these things?

The author will update around 7pm, because he has to wait for the background data to be updated, watch the feedback from readers in each chapter, and then make adjustments to the plot. Around 7 o'clock is exactly the time when everyone gets out of school and gets off work. It is also a suitable time for everyone to relieve the stress in life.

It is very surprising that the author actually signed the contract. Because it is the first time to sign a contract and I have no experience and there are some things happening today, I will update at this time. I would like to thank the early readers for their encouragement, otherwise we would not have signed the contract!

AI said that the description of the environment is not good, and the characters are not three-dimensional because there is no sense of picture. There is a certain truth. I usually pay attention to this when I read novels. But I think this may be because there are too many things crammed into the first three chapters. The protagonist travels through time, Goldfinger, creates a company, meets and befriends Nazarick members, conquers the union location, designs NPCs, and fights that Nordic boss to pave the way for subsequent time travel. However, it can be seen from the first three chapters that the author is very particular about all aspects of the original work, and he also put great care into designing this fan story. The creation of Nazarick by the protagonist prevents Momonga from tampering with Albedo's settings at the root. This has never happened in the Dot and Neko fandoms I've read, and he will also design a batch of other animated character NPCs. This is a very good idea. The writing is also there. Just make up for what AI said later. Let's change the cover to one of Momonga or another female character. Anime fans may not be familiar with this cover now.

Is this written by the same author?

No one watched it, not even someone scolded me.

Sorry, I thought no one saw it. It has been updated.