Douluo: I Am a Lawyer Who Became the God of Judgment

Leave big claws🙂

Unbelievable, the author is just a novice and can be mistaken for AI

Hello, hello, brothers and treasures 😍😍 I hope that the author will continue to update, so don't keep books for now~

Awesome brother, your book is suitable to be directly turned into a short play. If it is used as a novel, it would be so cool that I feel a little uncomfortable 🙂🙂

Teacher, is it okay to keep updating more than 3,000 words for 30 days?

By the way, will you add some memes about lawyer characters in Ace Attorney, Japanese cars, and those lawyer games? For example, that one pound of pear

The plot in Chapter 78 is a bit explosive. My little heart can't stand it.

You must give strong support 😍

First of all, the beginning is too short. Can you at least introduce what your hook is? Secondly, your paragraphs are too scattered, each sentence is divided into paragraphs, which greatly affects the perception.

Fan system writing. There are a lot of original characters appearing, and the number of words in the early stage of the system is also a lot, making it easy for readers to read ten lines at a glance. The main point of fandom is to suppress/cultivate/make friends with the original protagonist group. This writing method is not as good as directly writing original works, because just using the world view and not having the love-hate entanglement with the original work at the main level will naturally eliminate a large number of readers. The characters in the original work are also a bit intellectually depressed (within the normal range and acceptable). There is a problem with rhythm control. A little drama should be added between the fighting and killing, such as the protagonist's emotional branch, or the life branch (in the fandom, it is conflict + life). After all, fighting all the time is not a short video. All the readers can see is "the protagonist is fighting". There is no information/emotional anchor, and it is easy for readers to skip it. Your current plot is a very typical single-line narrative, so the writing speed can be speeded up. The biggest advantage of doujin is that it is easy to formulate an outline. You only need to consider the main goal of the protagonist, and then extend it on this basis. This subject of judging the original characters is actually not very interesting, especially in this love continent, either there will be multiple heroines, or there will be a single heroine/big heroine route, or the dark path of immortality (making differences). There is no emotional anchor in the fanfic, so letting the readers take the place of it is equivalent to writing the fanfic subject matter in vain. Final personal opinion: The characters are a bit like each other. The original characters have no memorable points and differences, so I can't remember them. But if it's the first book, it's still okay (it's more fun, and the graphics are better). In fact, this writing style is more suitable for Persimmon (if you plan to write original writing), but it may not be easy to sign here. What I said above is all in the direction of signing a contract. If you don't plan to sign a contract, just be happy as long as you want. The most important thing is to be happy and maintain your creative enthusiasm.