Football: I'm Retiring, and You're Calling Me a Teenage Prodigy?

In the age of fast food, you are a bit stained

To be honest, I feel that the writing is very good, but the pace is really too slow. At the beginning, I wanted to imitate the feeling of a late bloomer in Fox City. I woke up to the 16-year-old system in my 30s. I am not very young myself. I am in the middle and late stages of my career. I have been hanging around in the Chinese Super League and amateur teams. I talk about giving young people a chance to play, but then I don't play. To be honest, this is very funny. Isn't professional football just about competition? If you want to recruit and support newcomers, then you must also have strength and prestige. You are still the captain. I don't know the background setting. I feel that it is somewhat unpopular. If you don't play or score goals, how can you be the captain? There is no arrangement or background, so even if it is an amateur team, this situation is unlikely. Then he played under the persuasion of his good brothers. Because he got the system reward, he kicked the full moon scimitar, and then he was chosen to go to Su Yi. Leveling is no problem, but it feels too suppressed. Not to mention that you are over 30 and have no potential. How do people value betting on you? Su Yi is Su Yi. You level up well and you are looking forward to it later. Then let's take a gamble. Su B met Manchester City at the beginning, and then you didn't come on the field. It was 0-0 all the time. The opponent played very poorly. As soon as you came on the field, you were scored three goals. Now you are not used to this kind of depressing writing. You have to slow down and write later, and once If the goal is not scored, why don't you keep working hard from now on? In fact, there are still logical problems with this. Nowadays, the tolerance for new football players is very low, let alone an old football player. Is there any basis for supporting you to play in this state? It's not overwhelming. It makes people unconvincing and feels very awkward. But the writing and style are indeed very good. To be honest, I really like this style of writing. If you like to read long-term articles, you can read it, but I feel that there are very few people who look down on the protagonist nowadays, especially in competitive football. It has to be fun. You kick a goal and everyone says it is good, but you don't score. It feels like there hasn't been any exciting point so far. Even if he wants to calm down and write a slow-moving article, he still has to find something that makes him happy, happy, cool and smooth. Otherwise, how can he keep reading? You can't just abuse me all the time, otherwise why would you write online articles? (A little suggestion)

I thought the Chinese Super League had reached its limit. Su Yi is here.

Mainly because I saw that my reading ranking was getting higher and higher, from no to more than 100, to more than 10, and I couldn't help it anymore, so I wanted to express the idea like the title. I was attracted by the title and introduction of the book at the beginning. I personally felt that it was okay at first. Later, the interaction with the character who was suspected to be the heroine was a bit too much. Although it was a free chapter, I still wanted to skip it. Maybe it was because I had read too many other football and sports articles. I felt that I should write more about games and gains in the front to make it more attractive to me. How should I put it? It's normal not to write about his big wins. After all, he is getting old. At any rate, you should write more about his step-by-step gains and improvement in strength, and don't rush to write about other interactions outside the game. Just like when I get to know the protagonist through football, I will definitely pay attention to his football aspects first, and then I will not want to know more about him until I know enough about football. The summary is that it deviates a bit from the main line and the pace is too slow. The above are all personal thoughts

The pace is too slow, otherwise it would never be like this

Please change the sentence at the end of the introduction. Most people will cross it out when they see this sentence.

First of all, the system will not over-inflate the protagonist's values ​​and make him invincible quickly, especially for various values. When adding points from 89 to 90, the protagonist will need to understand or obtain a star skill. This requires completing the corresponding achievements in cup competitions, top national events or the five major leagues, which is definitely not that easy. The threshold will also be set when it reaches 99 to 100. The above is some kind of spoiler. Secondly, because the system is late, the system is slowly cultivating the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot move forward according to the system's ideas. The follow-up is more about the protagonist's choice. Because there are many young talents that the team is willing to cultivate, who will raise the stakes unconditionally if they are listed? So when the numerical value cannot be over-inflated, when faced with the dream, is it better to be a substitute for a wealthy club? Or should he go to a worse team and get the main position? Faced with the qualification issue of the national team, should he work hard for system achievements and national honor, or should he keep a clean mind, be alone and not participate for the time being? Many stories will arise from the contradictions of age in choices. So, this is a story about dreams, persistence, hard work and choice. I hope I can write it well and I hope you will like it.

24/97. Food and grass. Not bad. Average. I don't see anything so far.

I feel like it's pretty well written, and I really took it into consideration.

Are you going to give a 30-year-old veteran some crazy extra training???