I’m a College Student, and You Want Me to Lead the Charge and Slay Generals?

I finally understand why there are no comments on your book. I only read four chapters, and there are so many flaws that I don't even know how to talk about. It's a good thing to want to write a book, but before you write a book, it's best to read a few more books to understand the general logic, right? Rather than taking it for granted.

Why write this setting if you don't kill people?

If nothing else, the extremely poor households in the two sectors can disgust most of the people away.

Seeing Qi training and foundation building can persuade many people away.

After reading three chapters, the writing was a bit dry. In the first chapter, I saw two places where the description of the environment could be interspersed to enhance the perception. The things that can be exchanged later are a bit unreasonable. Also, the description of the performance on the battlefield is somewhat fake. There is no clear description of growth, and it feels like it is always skipping.

There are too many flaws. If you can continue to watch it, it will feel like you are eating chocolate-flavored rice. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Awesome, the person on the other end of the system knows what the thing is.

I'll give you a thousand rewards, just for your thoughts. Comfortable to watch

I don't know about anyone else. But it's very comfortable to watch now. That's enough

By the way, recommend the book. The biggest regret for a mortal to cultivate immortality "I have spent my entire life cultivating this method just to prove to the world that this so-called immortal is nothing more than this." "For decades, I have been hiding in Cangwu County, planning and killing countless monks, not all of which are foundation monks." "I thought that I would eventually be able to break the destiny of heaven, become a god and become an immortal, and make all the immortal cultivators respect me." "I didn't expect to fall into the hands of a young boy like you. I am really unwilling... Unwilling... Unwilling..." "Killing all the seekers in the world, but I can't kill a single person to fly to heaven!" "Hahaha... Hahaha... Hahaha"