Soaring Through Superpowered America

Have you considered one thing? In the book, there is a setting that people with super powers will become pseudo-humans after death. The protagonist is a person with super powers who came back after being beaten to death. In other words, the protagonist may be a pseudo-human.

If you want to write about superpowers, don't break it down in detail, and don't make the data so specific. Just describe the approximate destructive power. You will regret it later.

No, this physical fitness is measured by a smart watch?

Do you want to write about foreign language or Chinese language?

I feel like this book is well written. Why are my grades so poor? It feels like you have fallen into a capital trap. Really, I think your setting is okay, and the way you wrote it is okay.

Don't use your brain to see. The overall level is on the qualified line, but my professional knowledge makes me uncomfortable, so I won't comment in detail. Add a point that I can't stand (ai summary): Myopia of 1200 degrees is ultra-high myopia. After taking off the glasses, people's faces cannot be seen clearly from about five meters away, and the eyeballs tend to protrude. The biggest hidden danger in this situation is not that one cannot see clearly, but that the eyeball is excessively elongated, causing the fundus to become thinner, which can easily lead to serious diseases such as retinal detachment. Strenuous exercise and heavy physical labor must be strictly avoided in life. The real experience of 1200-degree myopia Limited vision: The world is extremely blurry when not wearing glasses. Not only is it difficult to see far, the lenses are usually very thick after wearing glasses, and the edges of the field of vision may be deformed or reduced. Easy to fatigue: The blood circulation of the eyes is generally poor. If the eyes are slightly overused, they will be prone to soreness, dryness and fatigue. Appearance changes: As the axial length of the eye becomes longer, the eyes tend to appear more prominent, which is why many people with high myopia have a strong desire to remove their glasses. Core taboos and precautions Strong exercise is strictly prohibited: This is the most important taboo. Definitely avoid violent collisions such as diving, bungee jumping, roller coasters, and boxing, as well as heavy physical labor such as weightlifting. The impact force or intraocular pressure changes generated by these activities can easily lead to detachment of the fragile retina. Normal jogging, swimming, and walking are completely fine. Be wary of fundus complications: High myopia is a high-risk group for fundus lesions. You must develop the habit of going to the hospital for a dilated fundus examination every six months to one year to check for retinal holes or macular degeneration. If you experience sudden loss of vision, floating black shadows or flashing lights, you must seek medical attention immediately. Reducing the burden of high eye use: Follow the "20-20-20" rule. For every 20 minutes of close eye use, you must look 6 meters away for 20 seconds. Never turn off the lights and stay up late playing with your mobile phone. The environment for daily use should have sufficient lighting.

If you want to write about the American Killing Line, you can actually search for "American Alice Line." In the United States, there is always a description of a situation where a multi-millionaire immediately becomes a multi-millionaire without a job, because Americans usually have no savings and immediately spend overdrafts when they have money. There are also taxes such as rainwater tax and lawn tax (for the same house situation, wooden houses charge less than brick and cement houses, which is why fires cause such huge losses). You can add a description of legal cadaver collectors in multiple states, who buy and sell human organs. There is a special term for murder cases similar to those in India called "kitchen murder", which is a murder in the kitchen where the man sets fire to the woman for the high betrothal gift. The first situation is caused by women who improve their caste and marry poor upper-caste men with a large amount of property.