
Mortal: the Hard-Talking System Gave Me the Eighty-Nine Mysterious Skills at the Beginning
凡人:嘴硬系统开局送我八九玄功
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- Ongoing
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- 31k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 9d ago
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- Qidian
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Discussion on online novels that travel through the mortal world
When modern people travel through the mortal world, ① they must bring Goldfinger with them. The mortal protagonist Han Li has a Goldfinger who only has a Sky Palm Vase. There will be some powerful treasures in the future, but those are the protagonist's hard work and do not count. ②Second, the protagonist is determined to practice cultivation. Women will only affect the speed of cultivation. This also makes the protagonist's cultivation path reasonable. Unlike some online novels, a woman's recommendation also shows how important the protagonist is to friendship. Isn't that both serious and established? How is that possible? It's not as good as many villains, although they have many women, but they are ruthless! That kind of villain is much better than the protagonist who has many women and seems to have many emotions. ③The third is the "Han Paopao" we often describe the protagonist. If you can't fight, just run away. Preservation is the most important thing. Only those who survive are qualified to climb the peak of cultivation and become the strongest. Otherwise, any opportunity and talent will be just a joke. ④The fourth point is that the protagonist still has a strong self-preservation ability and knows how to keep secrets. He accidentally obtained the Sky Bottle, and almost no one knows about it. He always knows how to preserve his strength and room for improvement, knows how to keep trump cards and bargaining chips, and will not do anything without reason. This is what makes the protagonist Han Li likeable. The most important traits for success are also the qualities that every successful person must possess. On the other hand, the protagonists of many online novels are all kinds of pretentious and showy, which makes people see through it at a glance and looks like a joke, which lowers the grade of the entire online novel and looks very rubbish. ④Fifth, the protagonist is relatively just and trustworthy. He will not hurt innocent people, and will not easily betray his partners who follow him. He understands that unity is strength and takes advantage of the situation. Looking at this novel about time-traveling among mortals, the protagonist has a golden finger in time-travelling, possesses the system, eighty-nine mysterious skills, seventy-two earthly evil skills, an innate human race, a lifespan of more than 10,000 years, and is familiar with the plot of mortals. It can be said that it is Tianhu's start. Even if the follow-up system functions no longer exist, then any of these five gold-finger-level advantages can allow the protagonist to walk sideways. However, it is obvious that the protagonist has weakened the power and learning difficulty of the Eight-Nine Mysterious Techniques and the 72 Disha Techniques, and ignored the value of the innate human race and the longevity of more than 10,000 years. The advantage of being a time traveler who is familiar with the plot is not reflected. Instead, the advantage is turned into a disadvantage, making his own path narrower and narrower. It is recommended that the protagonist should be more low-key in the follow-up. After all, the cultivation level is not high for the time being, and he may die if he is not careful. It would be embarrassing to have Tianhu at the beginning and travel through time in vain. Although the author can extend the life of the protagonist, it will inevitably make people feel uncomfortable and uncomfortable, and the plot is unreasonable, thus lacking interest in following the story. The second is to suggest that the protagonist stay away from Han Li. Han Li experiences strong winds and waves and jumps repeatedly on the edge of danger at any time. If the protagonist follows him or gets close to him, it is easy to die. Also, it is best to steal his opportunities secretly and hope that he will die. The mortal world without Han Li is the perfect world where the protagonist can freely develop and improve himself. Of course, the protagonist cannot offend or hurt Han Li, because it is too dangerous. If nothing happens, Han Li will become the strongest. Once offended, Han Li will be vengeful, and there will be no good consequences for the protagonist. For example, if Mr. Mo wants to seize Han Li's body, the protagonist should hope that he succeeds in seizing his body, pretend not to know, and try not to help Han Li. After all, a Han Li who will continue to grow and improve is more dangerous and more likely to harm the protagonist than Mr. Mo. Then the protagonist has such a long lifespan, can grow slowly, marry and have children, and then have the support and help of one or two families, and become the ancestor of the family, which is more conducive to his own cultivation path. After all, blood relatives will be more reliable and trustworthy than outsiders, and the protagonist is a modern person who traveled through the past. This identity will most likely make the protagonist have no sense of belonging and identity in the mortal world. After marrying a wife, having children, and having offspring, this problem will be solved. Finally, and most importantly, since the protagonist has the Golden Finger Eight-nine Mysterious Skills and the 72 Earthly Evil Magical Powers, it is necessary to focus on introducing them and emphasizing their power, as well as his various learning and cultivation processes. This is the highlight of almost all excellent online novels, and is also the basis for becoming an excellent online novel. However, the author obviously ignored this most important thing. In fact, the cultivation process and introduction of this golden finger are not easy to write clearly. The author gave the protagonist such a golden finger, which destined this online novel to be difficult to write. It is not as good as many online novels that directly give the protagonist a portable space. The portable space, as the name suggests, is easy to understand, convenient and smooth to use, and will not make people feel strange. The protagonist should make full use of his five golden fingers, stay away from the uncertainties and dangers that Han Li may bring, and intercept his opportunities. He should focus on cultivating immortals and hide his own problems in cultivating immortals. At the same time, he should integrate into the mortal world, practice and improve himself according to the rules of cultivation in that world, marry a wife and have children, integrate into that world, and give himself He is the most reliable and trustworthy backstage. As for the issue of marrying a wife, don't touch those famous women in the mortal world for the time being. Even marrying a mortal beauty is good. After all, you don't need to have many feelings. The identity of a time traveler also means that even if you marry a wife and have children, the influence of the wife and children will not hinder the protagonist's cultivation progress, and there will not be so many emotions. In the future, when I become stronger, I will go and get those famous beauties who have cultivated my true nature, and give myself a vision and preference after time travel, or I won't leave any regrets.