Cultivation: A New Talent Every Ten Years

I would like to ask, why does the protagonist always feel so miserable at the beginning of the novel? Can't we have a normal and bland start? There must be all kinds of deep hatred.

There is a turning point after the self-destruction. I feel that the protagonist does not know what he should do, so he directly separates himself to operate, such as the Great Buddha Temple, the Dragon Clan of the South China Sea, and the Little Light Realm. Your avatar is afraid of chicken feathers.

The world background and training setting are okay and a bit novel, but the plot is average, especially after the protagonist self-destructs in the South China Sea. I feel that the author's mind is messed up and I don't know how the protagonist should proceed. Suggestions: 1. Send clones to lurk in the Great Buddha Temple, the Little Light Realm of the South China Sea, and Luofu to cause trouble 2. Refining more clones and collecting intelligence, information is king 3. The protagonist obtains the official status of Dali as soon as possible, and it is best to join Xu Shaohu, the chief assistant. At present, it seems that the two have very similar ambitions 4. Defeat the Blood Demon Cult and improve the level. In addition, it is best to communicate with the master or uncle, of course, when the master has survived the decline and promoted to the Yinshen. That's all. In short, although there are flaws, but well written, it can be regarded as a masterpiece. Come on, author.

I don't know what the author is thinking. It's a good idea to separate yourself from the world and rebel against yourself. Don't you know how many people will die in a rebellion? Or don't you know that for the people under your command, the entire family will die with you? Have you ever thought about what you would do if you were the person who followed you when your avatar changed and everything was fine?

The writing is very frustrating, and the author obviously wants to write it in depth, but is not capable enough, so he can only write it like a gangster gang. And what should I say, the self-destruction to Gu Changqing shows that the author has a small style and focuses on the lower third path, so he cannot write a majestic article. Normally speaking, he should publicly reprimand the Great Buddha Temple and expose himself to the big shots of the Great Buddha Temple. The result? Provoke a big enemy for your sect and master. Moreover, it was said earlier that the sect wanted to keep the protagonist, but later it asked the protagonist to die. This in itself is a conflict. Basically speaking, I can see that I want to write into the layout, but my writing power is not enough. Resulting in an anticlimax.

This kind of desire to rise is always suppressed. It is pure and pure🐶💩

Why the protagonist wants to attend the wedding is obviously not in line with ethics. What you wrote is a bit putting the cart before the horse. Giving opportunities is not a given, it is a bit forced to lower your intelligence. The setting of your book is okay, but the writing is too intellectual.

The background setting and training setting are quite interesting, but the main line of the story is not clear. It feels like the protagonist comes and goes as he wants, without a clear goal. Furthermore, some plots are a bit abstract. The author needs to pay attention to the character issues. Overall food and grass, slightly toxic, usable.

How should I put it? The author doesn't seem to care much about upgrading. Except for upgrading at the beginning, he has not been able to upgrade after almost 100,000 words. He is doing things every day and is really afraid that the protagonist will be caught and locked up again.

Can an author delete a book? It's so ugly!