The Equipment Slot: From Sweeping Servant to Martial Saint

The writing is smooth, but the villain is too weak-minded and brainless.

There were mistakes at the beginning. The author checked more before publishing. Things have gotten better recently. Come on!

Well written, but the villain is a bit retarded

The mentally retarded are not as good as children. An alchemist is not needed by the organization, so he will be expelled.

Protagonist, why are you too kind to the Tie family brothers and sisters? The top pulse-opening skills are given for free, and the top dragon blood pills are given for free. Then he knew that the improved body-building elixir would have major flaws and be sold everywhere. The correct approach was to keep the improved elixir to himself. It would be better not to give it to the alchemy or at most to the original quality elixir. The author wrote this because he wanted to lead to a lot of bloody plots for no reason. The writing was smooth, but the plot seemed childish and inferior.

Alas, I have experience with eunuchs, so I really can't watch it.

The writing is quite good. I read it and have my own opinions. Please feel free to read it.

I read a lot of novels and decided to write one myself. The writing is barely passable. But your plot design is too elementary school.

I doubt how this protagonist survives

A good sister writes like a retarded person.