Double Boat

The writing is really good, but I feel that the fighting is not interesting. After all, it is a martial arts game, there is no chivalry, and it lacks a sense of passionate martial arts. It is a bit too casual. It would be better if the fighting can be strengthened. Come on 👍

The more I write, the better. The previous part is the same as that of the full-time master, so I have no interest in reading it. But later on, the pace is more refreshing, and the plot arrangement is very good, which makes it very comfortable to read, especially the last two or three chapters. Come on, author.

The author must have read The Master and it has the flavor of an e-sports game article. The prospects of writing only mobile games are too narrow. If you write about client games, the protagonist's hands will also become a problem. The idea is good, but I don't know if the plot of mobile and terminal game interoperability can be handled well, otherwise it may become a poisonous point. The protagonists of most game and e-sports articles like to attack or have strong control. Maybe it's because I have read relatively few online articles, and this is the first time I've seen an evasive protagonist. This gives me a unique style and flavor of e-sports game articles. There are main and side tasks, as well as long-term and short-term goals. The problem is that there is less direct and refreshing feeling (from the perspective of new online books), and the description of skills and game background themes make people have the urge to exit the page, which may lead to a smaller audience. I don't know if this is a new author. At the moment, it seems to be at least qualified and above, and I can finish reading it. I hope I can write better and better in the future.

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The characters and plot design are all very distinct, and it's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into it. The writing style is nothing to say, it's top notch!

Character names and character names are mixed up in the text, and then reality and games are interspersed back and forth, which makes it a bit confusing.