Douluo: The Great Tortoise Shell Master Who Snatched Elder Yi

Generally speaking, it's okay. There are no major flaws, but there are a few minor flaws, but they don't affect reading. The overall feeling is pretty good! 1. The protagonist's martial spirit is a light elementalist with extremely bright attributes. Therefore, it stands to reason that the protagonist's martial spirit should actually have its own talent. (This author has no setting. I don't know if the author has studied Dou Er's setting in detail. Or for some reason. In Dou Er, San Shao clearly wrote that the top martial arts will have their own innate abilities. For example, Wang Dong's Light Goddess Butterfly has its own good flying ability [the protagonist also wasted a soul ring to obtain the flying ability]. For example, Huo Yuhao's second martial soul, Ice Emperor, has the ultimate ice attribute, and his ultimate ice also comes with it. Several characteristics. Ye Guyi's Holy Angel Spirit also has the ability to fly, and she has the additional ability to kill evil soul masters, and evil soul beasts can improve soul power cultivation) 2. I remember that in the original work of the Great Turtle Armor Master, the protagonist Lu Xiaoyi seems to have died with his own body, and his soul remains alive. Then keep activating the Great Turtle Shell Technique, and then upgrade the Great Tortoise Shell Technique to the full level. If it is based on this principle, then it means that a large tortoise shell number can only affect the body, but not the soul! (However, Lu Xiaoyi finally resurrected himself by relying on the "resurrection" of the Big Turtle Shell Technique. I can only say that the setting of the Third Young Master is like this, and it is very inconsistent. If this is the case, then it means that Yi Lao has a certain amount of room for maneuver. After all, Yi Lao has a deep understanding of the soul. [In other words, the "death" of the Great Turtle Shell Technique can only be effective on living people, but not on dead people!]) 3. Then the protagonist has a complete body of Yi Lao, so there is a lot of room for manipulation. For example, there is something called the secret soul bone in Dou Er (although it only appears in Dou 2), but the secret method soul bone can increase the life of the soul bone. Yi Lao can definitely study it (and in the original work of Dou 2, isn't there a secret method of fusing two similar soul bones with similar attributes?). In this way, wouldn't the protagonist be able to have a soul bone with unlimited lifespan?! Let's see if the author has any good ideas or whimsical ideas in the future.

There is no problem with the writing, but what is the author's attitude towards Huo Yuhao? And the Ice Emperor, the Snow Emperor, and how to deal with the soul bone attached to the dark gold Terror Claw?

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