A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The Cheat Arrived Late, So I’ll Claim the Heaven-Palm Bottle First

The Bloody Forbidden Land was not far away from Xiang Zhili and even went with him to get the thousand-year elixir from his apprentice, and gave Nie Ying the anti-aging pill made from the thousand-year elixir. Are you afraid that others don't know that you have a lot of thousand-year elixir?

After writing so much nonsense, is it so difficult to kill Dr. Mo? Just make a cup of tea and a drop of heavenly creation liquid, and the problem will be solved. He will explode and die.

The more you read this book, the more interesting it becomes. It is a rare piece of human fiction, and it is written by Zhang Tie. It is very good. There are no major negative points so far, and it is worth reading. Come on, author, keep creating!

What kind of dog are you writing about? Are you still shocking the UC department even though you know he is a god? There is no need to form a team together. You are currently on the 13th level, but he is on the 10th level (god transformation) and you still call him senior brother? When he went to the forbidden area to form a team, who was looking for cannon fodder? Are you really not afraid of searching for souls? If I can't do it, I'll give you high-level ecstasy spells and I won't even try to find out your secrets? Seeing that the original character's expressions are not well controlled, is it okay for you to take the photo like this? Could it be that he, a transformed god, can't see the abnormality in you? Even Nangong Wan, who is connected to the Dan stage, noticed that you see something strange in him, let alone the transformed divine weapon. What the hell do you think you wrote?

What did Nangong Wan write in this paragraph? Xiang Zhili enters the bloody secret realm to play house with you?

Why is the protagonist Zhang Tie? I think it has changed some regretful or sad plot, so why not set the protagonist as Han Li or a new fictional character? There is no plot that requires Zhang Tie's identity, and Zhang Tie has no sense of substitution. Moreover, the protagonist's appearance has changed drastically after he practiced the body-training technique, and he just bears the name Zhang Tie, which has nothing to do with the original work.

There are thousands of mortals, and Han Li is a dog licker, half of them! Zhang Tie was a miserable person all his life. After his death, he worked as a bully for Han Li. When he got to the fairy world, he only remembered to give immortality to Li Feiyu, but forgot about Zhang Tie, his so-called fellow disciple... Why did the fandom with Zhang Tie as the protagonist have poor grades? Because he hates his failure, what did his predecessor mean to Han Li, but ended up replacing Zhang Tie and working for Boss Han as a dog licker? As soon as this book comes out of Qixuanmen and does not have any connection with Han Li, I will pre-order it immediately! All monthly ticket recommendations are offered! Take the post as proof!

Apart from changing the protagonist to Zhang Tie, what are the differences between this and the original work?

There is no shortage of skills in the mortal world, but there is a shortage of resources. The Yuanying Sect doesn't even have a suitable skill? You already know what to do in the subsequent plot without updating, because you are afraid of deviating from the original work and not being able to write it. The choices you make can be easily guessed by readers. If you don't hurry up and run to the Chaos Star Sea, which is still in the south of the sky, the human world often accounts for most of the spiritual world in fan fiction and the ending is hasty. Because there is no difference between the spiritual world and the self-created world, the mortals are all stinky. It is better to read the original work again.

The plot is boring, there is nothing of the author's own, and Goldfinger is corny. Disappointment