Tokyo: From Band Manager to Godfather of Music

Now with more than 100,000 words, the band is still in the midst of internal strife and has not even held a single live show. You can write about rock and roll.

It was super ugly. I came to see the band play, not to see the quarrel. What is there to write about in this kind of rubbish plot? Does the band have to quit? Can't we write without this plot?

After reading so many chapter titles from the author, I just want to say this

Is the purpose of this book just to write about women quarreling? The characters of Rizhen and Qingdao are not likable at all. They exist just to quarrel. The question is, how long can I write about a quarrel? I can't write 200 records. Is it still quarreling? Or should this band's quarrel be over and another band continue the quarrel?

Saw more than 40 chapters. My impression is that it is comparable to Mujica. Not to mention the plot development. As far as the level of being a god is concerned, he is indeed quite a god. Far away from people. Very close to God. The plot development is also too slow. 40 Photos. Not even an outdoor performance. I didn't see a few group trainings. There's a quarrel on the left, and there's a quarrel on the right.

If you can write chapters in the same format, you are also a genius. The two-dimensional memes are very dense🤣

It takes too much writing to form a band with original characters. How much energy does it take to write out the characteristics of each one? Can you really grasp it, author? Character creation comes naturally when writing fan fiction, just keep it from being OOC. So can you write a Bondoli fanfic? Ouch, as long as it's what I can do, I'm willing to do anything. 😭

Please vote for new books, collect them, and read them. As long as readers are willing, I will do anything.

Do you have a fan base 🙂

🎭 Character design: After reading the first five chapters, I found it acceptable. The male protagonist is at least not a disgusting type. 🎬 Plot: The progress of the plot is a little slow, and the girls in the band came out a little late. Nowadays, most of the people who read this kind of articles are fandom, so it would be a bit difficult to create original characters. The chapter titles are a bit too forceful, which actually creates a bad viewing experience. ✒️ Writing style: Occasionally there is a sense of jump in the writing context, such as Yumi's psychological description. I will keep this book for now, but I probably won't read it if I don't have enough food.