Global Doomsday: I Can Add a Little Bit to Everything

Chapter 1 The protagonist is chased away like a dog by a novice monster

After reading about ten chapters, I would like to give my personal opinion. The heroine's sister and friends can give some grounding. It's so violent at the beginning, which is a bit unconventional for a woman. In addition, to borrow the words of Xinghe, the end of the world should be about survival and people's hearts. There is too much about combat. It's better to be involved with the military or powerful people, to create a sense of expectation and pretentiousness. It's not good to keep escalating the battle.

Again, I started with a younger sister and then became a nanny. The characters are also wise

I have written novels about street fights. I was touched by the situation in the book and wanted to complain about it. Don't mind. The specific points of complaint are mentioned in the chapter review. 😁🤐🤐

There are big problems at the beginning 1. Is it possible to miss the military? The military doesn't know there's something wrong with these monsters? Kill them and throw them on the road? No, how much do you look down on the disciple soldiers? Okay, this is just barely, I have to say it, I can still explain it, the worst thing is that the military was caught off guard, and there were other tasks, too busy, haha 2. After seeing the death of the middle-aged man who rented the same house, the body was controlled, and the superman broke out. Is he sick? Ordinary people, even if there is a system, but as long as the system does not mandate it, if you encounter such a thing, you don't call the police and go to the police yourself?

The beginning is pretty good. Although the protagonist's IQ is not very high, he can barely continue reading. By Chapter 16, he becomes poisonous 😰

I don't know what the author's mentality was when he chose this name for a girl? Translation Yin agrees with prostitution? Firstly, it doesn't make sense when I read it, and secondly, I know it's a girl's name and it sounds disgusting.

Don't use AI to polish it. Even if you make a lot of modifications, the stiffness cannot be erased. It is recommended to read more about how those outstanding experts write articles. If you want to get into this industry, you need to work hard.

It would be very successful if the sister and her best friend were written like this, turning the advantageous start into a trashy start, and making readers hate these two characters.

I was just casually looking around, and I found something unexpected. I can't say that the writing is very good, but there is nothing poisonous about it. Come on, the author, work hard to keep up with updates, and update soon!

Why not get some powerful weapons to add points, such as guns, tanks, and martial arts?