A Diary of Adventures in the Mysterious Sea

What does the introduction say? Are you unwilling to disclose any content? Are you a great god? How many fan base do you have to dare to write like this?

There is no creativity, no conflict, and the opening is so long-winded. Although it is not toxic, I will not read it, unless the word count goes up and the grades are good, maybe someone will take a look.

It's too bland, even removing a lot of chapters won't affect the viewing experience

Adventure at sea with a big sword? You're not an adventurer, you're a pirate?

Does your cheating on this kind of maritime adventure only have something to do with you personally? What will your teammates write then? How do they keep up with the protagonist? Will we still have to cheat each of them? It's really troublesome. I don't understand what the current author is thinking.

I just finished reading it, and it feels like a Western fantasy. Nowadays, most of them are written in a Japanese-style Western fantasy, or a light novel, which makes people look very frivolous. I have always liked books with a sense of pictures. The way this book is written slowly and slowly makes people feel comfortable to read, and the rhythm is also very good. The author will definitely write it at such a pace. As long as it is not too watery like the Goblin book, don't rush the rhythm after it is released. I will write slowly like this. I am looking forward to the subsequent stories.

The plot is very epic, and the combat power system should be similar to Elden's Circle. Many details are correct. The follow-up should not be bad. The framework is very good. I look forward to the story of Uncharted Sea. There are also various heroic stories. I feel that more narrations can be written. For example, the great magician Merlin and some other heroes. How can there be less stories about such heroes? The legendary hero only remembers Merlin, and there are few other descriptions. The heaviness of the epic is due to the stories of heroes one after another.

There is no bitterness or hatred in this book, nor is it frivolous or impetuous. There are only stories about those who long for adventure, find partners, and overcome difficulties to take risks. The writing is simple, the characters are well-established, and the plot is simple and has no poisonous points. 👍

It feels good. I like taking risks, but there are less fights and killings between people. The focus is still on taking risks.

A good adventure work, with good characters and eloquent narration, good visuals and immersion, the early conflict is very gentle, very interesting, and it has the same style as one of my favorite novels, the adventurer relies heavily on it. I like it very much. After all, the sea is a paradise for adventure.