Douluo Dalu: Transmigrating into The Unrivaled Tang Sect with Qian Renxue

Someone, Tang San, watched the next session: What if I, Kangkang, were half a daughter on my forehead... Damn it, Qian Renxue?

First, it is impossible for Shrek to have no enemies against the Angel Martial Spirit. The name Qian Renxue is a huge trouble when he appears. Second, the Holy Spirit Cult, which is similar to Shrek, is a huge enemy. Third, the protagonist does not know the plot of Peerless Tang Sect. Fourth, all the resources accumulated in the ten years of fighting are gone. This kind of epic-level weakening and the lack of any sense of danger do not seem to be a fun article, and it is at the mercy of others at any time.

When I saw Shrek, I didn't want to see it anymore. I said before that I was just trying to keep quiet, but now I'm going directly under the eyes of the enemy.

I stopped reading when I saw that it was related to Wang Dong. No matter how well written in Wang Dong's original work, she is still Tang San's daughter, so she wants to be Tang San's son-in-law so much? Being Tang San's son-in-law and rebelling against Tang San, a loving father and a filial daughter? So fucking disgusting

After seeing the latest chapter, is the author going to cut it? The whole book gave me the feeling of being neither fish nor fowl. I guess the author didn't think about it himself. He wanted to have a harem and write about pure love. Since he wanted to write about pure love, it was ambiguous and ambiguous. After writing it, he didn't want to destroy pure love, and he was afraid of giving away his daughter. It was awkward. In addition to the emotional aspects, there are also problems with the direction of the whole book. Taking Huo Gua as his younger brother is more like rubbing Huo Gua's name. At present, the Ice Jade Scorpion has not been seen at all for a hundred chapters. The protagonist has eaten the benefits of the ultimate ice in one version in advance. Can't he deal with it later? The entire Huo Gua is the protagonist's mat. Please, everyone who comes to see Dou Er and his colleagues at least have some respect for Huo Gua. If you accept Huo Gua as your younger brother, there will be no consequences. It's okay to be completely marginalized, but if you're thick-skinned and take the opportunity, you won't snatch it away, and you won't let Huo Gua express himself. What's the point of keeping this role? Is he a good big brother who supports the protagonist? It's still the same four words, neither fish nor fowl. Since the protagonist is so bad, why does he have to dominate the outer courtyard? Yan Shaozhe ended up when the ultimate second martial soul appeared in the original work. The protagonist's configuration is like Shrek's blindness. This is not the way to write a book. All the writing power is used to describe how awesome the protagonist is. But this is not the way you write invincible writing. Invincible writing at least has some fun. Where is the coolness of such nondescript writing? It's a sideways push that's visible to the naked eye. The book written by Tang San is a bit toxic and disgusting, but at least the group portraits are qualified. Except for Wei Guangzheng, Tang Sanshao, the opposite characters are not pure tools. Even if they are a little more facial makeup, they are dog-licking, reckless, and sword-mad. There are only four words in this book from the beginning to the end. The protagonist is invincible. You ask me how he is invincible. I don't know. Ask me if I am happy or unhappy. Then the battle power has expanded too fast. As the previous comment said, you can't control it. The original battle power has been so expanded that Huo Guai had to participate five years in advance. The second time, the Tang Sect participated to balance the version. You don't have original writing power when you write like this. Is it even a deus ex machina to add points to the opponent? Why did the Holy Spirit Religion feel threatened and the evil soul master participated in the competition with the help of the Sun and Moon Empire? What else could be written besides the original story? What's even more broken is the character summoning card, which originally had a level-up challenge. Now it is directly sealed by myself. My suggestion, since you can't grasp the cool points, go with the original work. The pace is too slow. I wrote a hundred chapters less than a hundred days after being admitted to the hospital. If you don't want to steal Huo Gua's opportunity, skip it quickly. If you want to, be more generous. Douluo has the ice and fire eyes and other opportunities, so you don't have to follow Huo Gua's old path. Don't procrastinate when going through the plot. Beating children in the outer courtyard every day is just pretending to be a slap in the face? But it doesn't matter, I feel like the author is going to cut it off and updated one chapter in three days.

At first glance, the setting is quite interesting. At present, I don't know whether it is a purely cool novel or a partial cool novel (depending on what kind of plot is opened). Secondly, the character's emotional line is whether it is a harem or unrequited love (the emotional line with Qian Renxue in the first few chapters is quite sweet, but I don't know if I can open a harem and become a stallion. At least for now, it seems that with Wang Dongtong's dormitory seems to be a bit like a harem, but to be honest, I think Wang Dong will not accept him if he can, and he is always hostile to people related to Tang San 😁). At present, except for the protagonist who can break through the title Douluo at the beginning and meets Qian Renxue, there are basically no poisonous points. In short, I am looking forward to the follow-up.