The Myth of Containment Begins with the Viaduct on a Rainy Night

I feel like the first few chapters were written in a bit of a hurry, and I felt like I wanted to explain them all in one go. Although that's understandable, let's polish the plot and characters a little bit next.

There was too much talking during the battle, and the protagonist also talked too much in his heart. It was uncomfortable to watch. The subject matter is good.

The taste is too strong. There is also too much nonsense and too much inner drama in the description of battles, resulting in incoherence. There is also the issue of the character of the protagonist. In the first chapter, he was still an ordinary high school student. After entering the second dungeon, he became strong-willed and somewhat fragmented. In addition, it is obvious that your writing power is insufficient, so don't do anything fancy. Anyway, Gwen persuaded me to quit. Is she a yandere or a bad woman? Did you write this? Moreover, your plot development is a bit too routine, with nothing new. As soon as Little Red Riding Hood died, I thought that it should exist in the form of a summoned object. This is what happened. As soon as I entered the school, I wondered if there would be transfer students, and it turned out there were. The strength of your book should be its subject matter. The subject matter related to mythology is very interesting, but the collection is not solid enough. I read this book largely because of the notes on the protagonist's professional skills. But your overall writing style is so weird, it's almost like it's been picked up by Japanese comics. "It's, isn't it?" The wording is so strange. Overall, it's pretty good, just for food and grass.

It seems to be a God-killer-like worldview. I haven't seen this type of novel for many years. It was very popular during the time before the epidemic. The content is well written, but a bit too wordy, but the light novel section is not bad, come on, the writing is good.

Excluding the Qidian official and the author, I am the 6th reader to post, and the post is the 6th. I am a veteran and follow the author, and there is no relationship. 2026/7/23 This book potential number 071

I feel like this is a book with great potential. The mythology examination drama is a popular science joke, which is well integrated with the actual content. The protagonist also slowly and hilariously deconstructs these to dilute the boring feeling of a simple academic paper. The characters are well established and there is almost no OOC. If you are interested in mythology, I think it is worth reading.

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Keep fighting, no story

It smells like a Japanese light novel, but how do you put it? Fine. It's not that strong, maybe because of the structure of the story. Including the writing and plot framework arrangement, it is not like a regular online article. It's just so-so. It's more suitable for middle school and high school students, as well as college students.

I feel like the special point of hell is written very strangely.