Who Rebooted My World?

The protagonist really feels like betting on a dog. If he didn't have the time ability and the protagonist's halo, I would have sent it directly.

The current plot is very good, but how can the data be so bad? After all, he was last year's 12-day king, so he shouldn't give more traffic to his new book release.

It is recommended to make it clear who said which sentence. There is no need to write the same person in several paragraphs, and each paragraph should be enclosed in different double quotation marks. If you really want to divide a person's sentences into paragraphs, you can use this: "The first sentence. The second sentence. The third sentence." You sometimes like to divide several sentences of one person into several paragraphs, and then the other person suddenly goes on to write the second person's words without indicating the speaker. Like this: "A's first sentence." "A's second sentence." "A's third sentence." "B's first sentence." What about B. "B's second sentence." You might as well change it to: "A's first sentence. A's second sentence. A's third sentence." "B's first sentence." How about B. "B's second sentence."

Fortunately, I only rewarded 100, but it's a pity these monthly tickets, why do I feel that the books I rewarded have become eunuchs in the past few months, it's like a curse 😭😭😭

This guy will stop at the Twelve Heavenly Kings.

There are too many female characters, and there is no discrimination. The male-driven sci-fi genre is a bit awkward with its yin and yang waning.

There is only one reason for cutting the book. The plot is advancing too slowly. Now there are no die-hard fans. Who has been looking forward to your plot?

If the pace is slow, the results will not improve quickly. In addition to the fantasy writing, Yishi Fengshen is a type of book that opens up new tracks. If you are eager for quick success and profit, you will not be able to gather original fans. The setting of this book is actually okay. I believe that once the sequence is finished, people will come back naturally. The slow-paced story unfolds slowly, relying on the excitement of big events to attract people. Once it is written, others will naturally promote it, alas!

Not very good. Even without those fancy settings as gimmicks, the story itself is very cliché, not to mention the characters are average and have no highlights.

Although the pace of the first few dozen pictures is a little slower and the data is a bit worse, I cut it directly 😰 I hope the next one can speed up the pace and firmly catch the audience's attention For time-based novels, I also want to see what new tricks the author can write 😁