From Chinese-Style Lighters to Industrial Hegemony

The first time I met and wrote about Zhang Yaqian

Retail, entertainment, home appliances, technology, and the entire industry chain. Do you want to become a country? 😅

There are too many women. In just over 70 chapters, three or four female supporting characters have appeared. Now in these chapters, even the manor housekeeper and maid have appeared. If I didn't know that the protagonist has only started the business four months ago, I would have thought he was a billionaire I don't lick women, but I lick employees too much. Cleaning is on 8 A base salary of 1,000 yuan, a salary of 15 yuan a year, half of the year as holidays, five insurances and one housing fund, and quarterly and annual bonuses. This salary is enough to recruit four or five people. In reality, no company can afford such high manpower expenses. The author is too idealistic. To put it bluntly, how will you manage your employees in the future if you make them greedy in the beginning? I don't want to complain, but they are all eye-catching from the bottom of my heart. While there are still few chapters, you can definitely change them. Of course, it's up to you whether you want to or not.

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First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The detailed description is very touching. I like the descriptions of several supporting characters very much. But the author's writing is very serious and the bad information is also very detailed. There is no logical problem. At least I haven't noticed it yet. The pattern is very grand. I want to open up multiple multi-million-level employment tracks in the AI ​​era. Whether it is intangible cultural heritage, domestic luxury goods, or rectification of the entertainment industry, I am very interested in it. This novel basically does not have meal replacements, these are all a little bit It is obvious that the author is a newbie, with outstanding advantages and disadvantages. It's too long-winded and too trivial. It doesn't distinguish between the important and the important. The rhythm is very inadequate. Do you think that you have written very well? In some places, you are very self-indulgent. You have written a lot of places that should be mentioned in one stroke. You have mentioned in one stroke the places that should be emphasized. You have almost written 100,000 words, and you have only collected 300 words. Should you reflect on whether you are just burying threads? Do you, a newcomer, need to bury so many branches? The most important thing is to make us happy first. Also, I am waiting for your Zhiyu lighter to be released. It has been more than 30 chapters, but it has not been released yet. I can speed up the progress. The first five or six chapters you wrote are poor and too verbose. I suggest you shorten the first six chapters to the first three. The results will definitely be much better I really can't stand the torture of reading. I am still looking forward to your subsequent plot. I will read it when you have finished reading 300,000 words

Write faster. People who work hard can write thousands of pages a day. You just wrote these two chapters on this day. Update quickly. Don't be too lazy.

Xiao Zhu, I really like it,

Encouragement

The biggest joy of this book is that Goldfinger makes others lose without knowing how to lose. I can only admire how terrifying the protagonist is. The idea of ​​the protagonist deifying himself at the beginning is right, and setting up a crying persona is also good But you have to figure out when to use a crying persona and when to use a god persona. The author is a little confused now, or is caught in a kind of self-movement... After being encircled and suppressed by many parties, this is the time to show his "unruly", deify himself, and become a direct business champion! How can you admit your mistake at this time? When you win, everyone will work together to wipe your "radical" butt? What are your future business plans? Anyone can give advice, saying it's for your own good and learning a lesson, or even go against it. You can't handle it yet, after all, this is your family and colleague who "saved you from fire and water". Even Liu Bei doesn't cry during a battle. He has to wait for Baidi City to admit his mistake. Yiling hasn't been fought yet, so what's the way to admit his mistake first? Benevolence and being a bitch and being unable to withstand pressure are two completely different concepts. They are both beautiful and powerful, but miserable, and live broadcast... Sigh The golden finger of the protagonist should be following the path of Huo Qubing in business. How can he push the right to speak to others? Should Huo Qubing hold a democratic meeting before he attacks? After you win, you have to give credit and reward everyone, so that you can have cohesion. What kind of operation are you doing to make yourself so moved that you become a literary youth?

The heroine Chen Yaoyao