Equipping Myself with Everything, Starting as a Fisherman

You are living too tiringly and cruelly!

Although the previous crisis with Manager Sun was slightly flawed according to the commentary, it was considered to have survived the main plot in the early stage. However, as soon as the conflict with Manager Sun ended, the crisis immediately began to weaken. Originally, it was originally written that the original person was forcibly sold into a gang, and he hated the gang, thinking that there would be a plot to overthrow the gang later on. However, after practicing martial arts with Manager Wang, he became more and more integrated into the gang, and it will be written later. It's too weak, the main line is not clear, the crisis is too small, it feels a bit fluid and there is not so much expectation, the behavior is still smooth and not bad, and I don't know whether you want to write about Gou's taste, or the way of showing off the saint in front of others. The sight of Gou's slow development in the front is quite strong, but later in the martial arts practice, he keeps showing his extraordinaryness. It's completely the other way around. When the crisis is strong, Gou is pretending, and when the crisis is weak, it's weird.

. . . Your achievement of increasing fish harvest by three has persuaded me to quit. The cool thing is that you can generate fish infinitely due to bugs. Similar to another novel where you are equipped with a fishing net and you will catch a fish once every three times, ordinary equipment and props are just a concept, which is too exaggerated.

I want to learn this beginning. I wonder if book friends feel there is a sense of expectation at the beginning.

I was introduced to poison every day!

The pace is too slow, and I don't know what the use of holding an equipment slot is.

A ceremony for recruiting disciples, endless writing

The writing is very fluent, and it can be regarded as a kind of food for eight-legged essays. Come on.

🎭 Character design: There are some problems

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!