Naruto: Transforming the Ninja World from Forging Alchemy

🤫 Every anime or game is a small circle. In fact, Steel ➕ Naruto is enough to play Naruto. Needless to say, even if you have never watched Steel, you can at least understand what system Steel is through the explanation. But looking at a lot of character names, the larger the coverage area, the more people are encouraged to quit. You can't guarantee that readers will cover the same area as you. You don't introduce it in detail. If you don't understand, just persuade them to quit and run away. You can write in detail. It will be said that there is no progress in the main line of hydrology. In the end, the audience will become smaller and smaller as the writing becomes less and less.

The reading threshold is a bit high. If you haven't read Steelmaking, you may be confused.

There are many books on the site to cultivate one's true nature. Why is India called the ninja gesture? There are professional terms in the fanfic, why do you need to come up with a name yourself? There are a lot of descriptions in the first few chapters that can be basically mentioned in one sentence, but the writing style is the same as reading comprehension. This explains, that explains. Even the well-tuned AI can write better than you even if it doesn't sound good.

Naruto fans will have a headache after reading your book, and other fans will feel dizzy after reading it.

There are too many bad sentences, so I used reading software to listen to them before publishing.

I've been confused by the last few photos I've seen. There are too many characters and I haven't even explained them properly. So many characters pop up at once.

It's too messy. It's a good idea to embody the content of the book written by the protagonist. It's a bit like the concept of the Book of Truth in the later stages of Kamen Rider Holy Sword. It can even complete and create a fantasy world. Unfortunately, the characters are too messy, and there's not even a shadow of the protagonist. It's too group-like and too abstract.

The protagonist's skill at pretending to be magic is not as good as a random fortune teller by the overpass.

To be honest, it was a bit confusing. Seeing Chapter 19, I don't remember who the protagonist is. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. Just a lot of people I didn't know came out to fight. I don't know why they are fighting?

Isn't Naruto the world of a bunch of lunatics? Why can't these people die? Is the author from a young age?

Fans are making a mess on the track, and there is another newcomer 😃. The update is better.

Now you still engage in this kind of emotional value, which is such a crappy thing.

The little man in the bottle After the little man in the bottle gets the truth, should he perform a few high performances, like the King of Insects?

The King

Let's not talk about the reading threshold. The only flaw is the writing style, which makes me confused.

This article only uses settings and some nouns from other anime, but there will be some differences After all, the background is the setting in Naruto, and not all rules are suitable So the rules that appear in this book are subject to the arrangement of this book See Those who have experienced other animations, please don't be imitative --The main reason is that the author is just a husband and can't create so many new words Thank you again for your guidance🌹🌹

The Daimyo of the Kingdom of Wind is the fattest

Well, when I first saw The Alchemist, I thought I might not understand it. After all, I haven't watched The Alchemist that much. After watching it, I found that it seemed okay.

After reading dozens of chapters, the main character is gone

It's mainly characters made of steel. If you haven't seen it, you don't know who they are and what their personalities are. But if you write about it, you'd think it's a bit watery.

You might as well just say Mazumi is an alchemist! After all, he clapped his hands directly to the Buddha

Most of them are descriptions of combat, this one uses that move, that one uses that move. Too many combat descriptions will lead to aesthetic fatigue.